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Epilogue: Supper In The Green Lake Room

Epilogue: Supper In The Green Lake Room

While luncheon was subdued, supper was lively indeed.  As many in the room were in shock and denial, an equal number saw an opportunity to advance their private causes, and with them, the fortunes of their respective peoples.  Apache Traders and Western Bandits were busily recreating Scottsdale Arizona using pastries and condiments, planning out battle strategies together.  Flagellantes were discussing evacuation plans with the nobility of New Spain.  Individuals who had not darkened a church door in many a year were buying rosary beads and learning how to use them.

A chamber quartet has playing Heitor Villa-Lobos ‘Bachianas Brazillerias’ on a raised platform over the Green Lake. Don Antonio thought its somber and sweeping melodies oddly apt for the occasion.



Synopsis: Abbot Gaudentius invites himself the supper table of the Sepulvedas and Bacas during the banquet.  He asks that a place be set for a sixth guest.

The Sepulvedas and Bacas are in shock and denial. If Rintiala’s story of the events at the Sanctuary on Camelback Mountain are true, why hasn’t New Spain been destroyed by the Sky Wanderers.   The two couples list all the known facts about the Sky Wanderers, setting the priority on the few known artifacts, those necropoli still covered with poisonous shrouds, potentially as dangerous as they were over four hundred years ago.  And if the Sky Wanderers came soon, what could New Spain do about it? The Dons agree: these stories must not reach the common people of the Empty Earth. At best it would destroy their budding ambitions and future hopes, at worst it could lead to savagery.

At the end of the meal, when all are considering when and how to depart, a single Apache Trader comes to their table. He is about thirty years old, medium height, and very muscular in build. He is wearing a poncho of a silky blue color that reflects and manipulates the light of the bronze torches in the Green Lake Room.


“Good evening to you, Abbot Gaudentius,” the Apache Trader said cordially.

“And a good evening to you,” Abbot Gaudentius replied. “Dons and Donas, I would like to introduce to you the man who walked out of the desert, carrying the truths of these stories of First Sister Rintiala.”

The Sepulvedas and Bacas rose to greet their new supper companion.  “I am very pleased to finally meet these two great families again. It has been a long time.”

“Again?” Dona Carmencita asked.

“Yes. Please allow me to introduce myself. My family name is lost to me now, but you may call me ‘Hunts-The-Ruins’.



Luncheon In The Green Lake Room

Synopsis: a short transition from ‘Mother Day’ to ‘Ghost Sickness’; here the focus is on the Sepulvedas and the Bacas comparing what they have heard about Nuegua to their experiences of life in the Empty Earth.

Perspective: Limited Omniscient, Don Antonio

Don Antonio was the first to say what he supposed everyone else was thinking.

“That First Sister of Clan Demetra was lying through her teeth. She threw that poor Berylia to the dogs.”

“Whatever she did wrong, the treatment of the First Sisters was terrible,” Dona Carmencita agreed.

“I foresee a peasant revolt developing,” Don Baca observed. “Clan Demetra has ten times as many as the other two combined, and yet they are kept in line by the Healers–the natural adminstrators–and I daresay we will discover that later on the Builders will become a military caste.”

“But…and I have to say this…Rintiala and Dianire are girls I would be proud to have as daughters.  They were ready to give their lives for each other, without hesitation.” Dona Baca said.

“I have to agree with you there, even though I’m probably not going to put another coin in the Flagellante coffers after this meeting. Rintiala was brilliant and brave, a natural leader.  I’ve said all along that if you start from an early age, you can build a leader by age twelve.” Don Antonio continued. “But there is no doubt about it.  That Alathea and Tianara were too sure of themselves. They couldn’t see Clan Demetras’ plan, when it was right in front of their face.”

“Why I wonder is the story written from Dianire’s perspective?” Dona Carmencita wondered. “Surely since Rintiala was there, she could have said ‘I saw this’ or ‘I did that’, simply reporting the facts.”

“Dona Carmencita, I think I know why,” Dona Baca chimed in. “Rintiala wanted us to see Dianire as she saw her then, not as she became later.”

“Dona Rina the Compassionate, ever the true friend,” Don Baca said, reciting the nightime prayer well-known to the children of New Spain.  “But why are we here at all? Something much more serious must be forthcoming, for the Queen to have called this solemn assembly.”


Mothering Day: The Decisions

“Tuck and roll, Dianire. I’m letting you go…now!” Rintiala shouted over the noise of the hurricane winds that Berylia had added to her perverted living dream.

Dianire curled up as best she could, but she had been suspended her own body’s height above the smoothly-raked white sand in at the entrance of Rintiala’s new Healing Temple.  Contact with the surface made her right shoulder nearly snap–she could hear the crunching of bone-on-bone within her–and white sand flew up in her face. Only the poncho given her by the Pregnant Virgin protected from the further harm.  She spit sand out of her mouth, and coughed.

“Come on, Dianire, we’ve only got a few moments before Berylia realizes we aren’t frozen in fear,” Rintiala commanded, grabbing her and pulling her up sharply by her left arm. “Goodness! You’re heavy for someone so skinny.”

Dianire rose to her feet, shaking off both the sand and Rintiala’s helping hand. “What do we do now?”

“We use the Temple against Berylia,” Rintiala said. “First thing, you’ve got to call back all your termites and attack the eighty-one Cactus Mothers that ring the Temple.”

“Don’t I need to be in a Cactus Mother to do that?”

“No, silly. You’re in a living dream right now. Just think it, really really hard. We can’t fight at Dragon Head and the Temple at the same time. Right now the Berylias around the Temple are half asleep, waiting for new orders from the first Berylia.  Okay, that’s enough explaining. Let’s go.” With that Rintiala ran to and through the main entrance, heading for the Great Altar.


Rintiala and Dianire return to the new Healing Temple within the living dream of the Grotto, and prepare to defend it.  Rintiala explains the danger: she has learned that the Birthing Mothers can hold a living Nueguan woman in indefinite suspension;  they were designed this way in case of potentially fatal birth complications.  The supreme danger is that if Berylia can obtain this knowledge from Rintiala, she can poison both her and Dianire with her perverted Mother Fruit, make them believe they are dead, and then place them in Birthing Mothers.  The living dream of the Grotto would become a living death.

“But how can Berylia do this?” Dianire asked.

“The same way I’m going to show you how the Great Altar can fight,” Rintiala answered.  She took Dianire in her arms and kissed her full on the lips.  In a rush, the knowledge of the mechanics of the Great Altar flowed into Dianire from Rintiala.

Rintiala broke contact first.  “That’s the first time today I’ve enjoyed myself,” she said, winking at the astonished Dianire.

Dianire asks if the Pregnant Virgin could stop all this, but Rintiala says no.  The Birthing Mothers are older, and can override the Pregnant Virgin.  (I want to introduce the programming concept of override to young readers,as a science fiction parable).

All is not lost, however.  The Great Altar is a living machine, designed to protect the Temple against intruders.  But it requires two Nueguan women to operate it: one the brain, one the tail and talons. As a backup measure, Rintiala has Dianire recall all of her termite workers to the Temple, to kill all eighty-one of Berylia’s Cactus Mothers, which have now grown poisonous projectile thorns.

The battle begins.   Berlyia launches an attack on two fronts: one through the main entrance, and one through the topmost arches of the Temple, so as to gain the high ground. Dianire succeeds in flooding Dragon Head with mud and silt, but then she does not have enough resources to combat all of Berylia’s multiple selves.  For every termite soldier she creates, Berylia matches it with a poisonous thorn.

Dianire fights on, sweeping away Berylia and her poisons from the floor of the Temple, while Rintiala changes the structure of the Temple arches even as the Berylia’s are climbing across them.  But neither strategy is enough.  Many Berylias sweep down on vines from above, and force Rintiala out of her seat on the Great Altar.  To demonstrate her power, Berylia fuses all of her copies back into herself. She positions a poison thorn to Rintiala’s left carotid artery, and forces Dianire to yield.

“I don’t want to kill either of you, but I also can’t have you interfering with my plans. With Clan Demetra plans.” Berylia hissed.

Because she is now only one, and her attention is split between Rintiala and Dianire, Berylia does not see the translucent threads growing together behind her.  In a wink of an eye, these threads flow over the thorn, yanking it from Berylia’s grasp.

The silvery, translucent form of an athletic young woman leaps from the highest arch, with a trajectory punch to Berylia’s heart, knocking her off the altar.   The athlete opens her eyes and mouth wide, from which spidery webs flow, covering the struggling Berylia.   Though they seem insubstantial, they lift Berylia off the floor, and carry her back to the now-visible red-and-gold Training Mother, depositing her there, and closing the cover.

The athlete’s form becomes more substantial until a woman of mature years, strong and svelte, stands before Rintiala and Dianire.  Dianire can see a bit of every Clan in her: the strawberry blonde hair and violet eyes of Clan Tiala; the muscularity of Clan Redourine; the curvaceousness of Clan Demetra.

“I am Oldest Mother.  I heard your call,” she says to the two shocked girls.

“Do you have a Nueguan name?” Rintiala asks.

“No, I came before Nuegua.  You could say I helped to build this place. My name is Andrea Radford, and I was born in 2073, thirty-seven years before the war with the Sky Wanderers.”

“Did you actually defeat them?” Dianire asks, recovering her composure.

“Not really.  We just tricked them for a while. I’ve been waiting for you two for a long time. It’s your task to defeat them.”

“You made Nuegua? I have so many questions to ask you!” Rintiala shouted.

“Me too. Like how Rintiala can do what she does,” Dianire added.

“Later for both of you.  Now, it is time to wake up,” Andrea Radford, Oldest Sister of All Clans said, as her image and voice faded away.


Dianire woke to find Berylia sitting up in her opened Training Mother, sobbing uncontrollably.

“I had terrible nightmares,” Berylia choked out between sobs and sniffles.

Dianire’s vision blurred for a moment.  She saw an older, filled-out version of herself walking up to Berylia’s Training Mother.  “No you did not,” this older Dianire said.  “You saw your potential. You saw the truth about yourself, and so did all the Healling Sisters in the Temple.”

This older version turned to Dianire. “So you’re awake? You don’t look all that awake.”

“But how can I be here and be you at the same time?” Dianire asked, feeling very light headed.

“Oh, snap out of it. It’s me, Tianara. I’m your older sister, remember?”

“Okay, okay,” Dianire complained. “All I care about is: where is Rintiala?”

First Sister Alathea came walking up behind Tianara.  “Rintiala has yet to awaken, but her dreaming-signs are normal, not to worry.”

“Tianara, how did you get here so fast?” Dianire asked.

“Fast?” Tianara threw her head back and laughed. “Dianire Redourine, my trouble-making sister, you have been in the Training Mother for three days. I came as fast as I could from the far south-east. There’s been Western Bandit trouble down there.”

“I called both First Sister Tianara and the First Sister of Clan Demetra to the Healing Temple when it was clear that something had gone wrong with your Mothering.” Alathea said. “We have reviewed the evidence from all three of your living dreams and have come to our decision, which we will deliver as soon as Rintiala awakens.”

As if on cue, outer shells of Rintiala’s Training Mother split apart, revealing a Rintiala on a cushion, her strawberry-blonde hair spread out like wings. “I heard lots of mumbling, so I thought it was time to wake up. Did I miss anything?”

Dianire vaulted over to Rintiala, placing her left ear over Rintiala’s heart. “After all we’ve been through, you have to make an entrance like that,” Dianire said softly.

Rintiala tucked in her chin to get a better look at Dianire. “And I’m glad to see you. And Mother? And First Sister Tianara? I’m sorry, but I don’t know your name, First Sister of Clan Tiala.”

The First Sister of Clan Tiala was much older in appearance than the other two First Sisters. Streaks of grey ran from the temples of her hair, all the way down her back.  She had the fiercest steel-gray eyes that Dianire had ever seen.  Her mouth was set in a permanent grimace. “Just First Sister will do, young Healer.  I don’t plan to be here long.”

Alathea took command of the conversation. “We First Sisters have a set of difficult problems to solve with you three.  The first problem is that the Pregnant Virgin has decided that you are now Mothered. Do you understand what this means?”

Rintiala spoke first. “We can heal any disease with a touch.”

“Poetic but somewhat accurate.  In the presence of a dangerous disease, your body will secrete the antidote, primarily through your breast milk.  All you have begun to lactate, though with stress you have been through, you might not notice it yet.”

“But we’re just girls! At least Dianire and I are,” Rintiala objected.

“Not any more, my daughter. Mothering is permanent. Do any of you know the second power that Mothering bequeaths you?”

Dianire thought that Alathea was just reciting something out of a book now. “Of course I do.  All three of us will live to be two hundred years old. We will grow up normally until we are twenty,  then change will occur, and we will not turn twenty-one until we are eighty years old.”

“Very good,” Tianara replied. “I see that you do occasionally pay attention when I try to train you.”

“And the third? Do any of you understand why this is our biggest problem?” Alathea asked, looking directly at Berylia.

“Our dreams can become our deeds,” she answered, tears still drying on her face.

“We Firsts cannot take this last power away from you, nor can the Pregnant Virgin rescind her Mothering.  Each of you must make a choice, then.  Rintiala of Clan Tiala, we three Firsts have decided you can enter the Guild of your choice. Which do you choose?” Alathea looked at her daughter, her concern evident in her furrowed brows.

“Mother, Sisters…I choose the Healer’s Guild.”  Rintiala answered solemnly.

“And you, Dianire, you can choose any of the three Guilds. Which do you choose?” Tianara asked her sister.

“I choose to be a Builder. I’m just not comfortable in the Grotto of the Pregnant Virgin. Let me live out in the open, building things.”

“So? All this for nothing?” Alathea asked incredulously.

“Nothing? No, Rintiala showed me that I can do things no other Builder can do.  That’s why I want to be a Builder.” Dianire said proudly.

All three of the Firsts turned to Berylia. “Berylia of Clan Demetra, in your living dream you attempted to murder two of your fellow Nueguans, and prospective Sisters.  Had you done this in the flesh, your punishment would be swift and sure.  But since you did no lasting harm to Rintiala or Dianire, it is decided that you may not enter any of the three Guilds, nor may you use a Cactus Mother again.”

“You will be made a Servant of the Guild,” First Sister of Clan Demetra said to her softly. “It is for the best.”  Berylia took in a deep breath and held it silently before she answered.

“YOU CAN’T DO THIS TO ME!” Berylia screamed at the top of her lungs.

Tianara spoke next. “In your dreams, you made it clear that Clan Demetra plans to create an addictive Mother Fruit, to enslave all who eat of it. Worse, you made it clear that Clan Demetran women will have indiscriminant sex with all the men in Empty Earth after these men have eaten of this perverted fruit.  All the Healing Sisters witnessed your dream from all three perspectives, and they have judged this to be true.”

“You made me do this!” Berylia shouted at First Sister of Clan Demetra. “It is your plan, not mine!”

“There is no proof of any such plot, nor would I condone such a thing,” First Sister of Clan Demetra said to Alathea and Tianara. “Berylia descended into madness, and I am willing to admit that was my fault. She is too old to be Mothered, but she would not stop petitioning me, so I let her try.  I assumed that the Pregnant Virgin would reject her as soon as the Living Dream of the Grotto commenced, but that was not to be. For this indulgence, I am deeply sorry to all,” she said, bowing deeply to the other Firsts.  She looked at Berylia silently, while her fists clenched and unclenched. “Bath yourself, and pack your things.  We leave for Village Demetra within the hour. Speak to no Healer or Builder while we leave.”

With that, First Sister of Clan Demetra helped the shivering Berylia out of the Training Mother, and walked beside her, holding her gently.  When they reached the doorway, golden in the afternoon light, Berylia turned and stared at Rintiala and Dianire in a way Dianire could not fathom, but she felt ants crawl up and down her spine.  Then the Demetrans were gone.

Alathea looked at her daughter and sighed. “This was not the Mothering Day I expected, not at all.” She put her thumb to her lips, cogitating. “Still…there is a large group of people waiting outside for you two, and we can’t mill around here much longer without missing supper.  So come girls, let’s eat.”

“You’re going to let Clan Redourine eat as much as they like? Goodness, there will be nothing left over for tomorrow,” Tianara said, laughing. “Come my new younger Sister, let’s see what they are serving. I hear it is roast emu, with all the dressings.”

Dianire helped Rintiala out her Training Mother, while Alathea prepared for her daughter a robe of white and indigo, the dress of a Healing Novice. “Fits quite well, I think,” Alathea said, smiling for the first time.

“I apologize for my behaviour when we first met,” Dianire said to Rintiala. “You can call me Dee from now on, now that we are friends.”

“Is that what we are?” Rintiala said smiling. “Now, you can call me Rinnie.”

In the late afternoon of Village Tiala, home of the Healer’s Guild, three young women left the entrance of the Healing Temple entrance together; two of them arm-in-arm, smiling and waving at family and friends. The third, the small one, waited until the first two had moved on with their party, and slinked off the premises, her eyes filled with a fire of unquenchable fury.





Overview: Structural Changes to the Nuegua Books

Upon near-completion of the chapters “Mothering Day” and “Ghost Sickness”, I have come the conclusion that while the storyline (and timeline) of the Nuegua saga will not change; the book structure needs to.   The sections beginning with “Meeting At The Green Lake Room” and ending with “Ghost Sickness” are easily a full 300-page novel, especially when all the illustrations and maps are added.

The structure I am going to use for the books (pdfs created with Scribus) are:

Book One: First Sister (Rintiala’s origin story);

  1. No Mercy In the Cathedral
  2. Meeting At The Green Lake Room
  3. Mothering Day: The Trials
  4. Coffee In The Green Lake Room
  5. Mothering Day: The Decisions
  6. Luncheon In The Green Lake Room
  7. Ghost Sickness
  8. Conversations Over Supper In The Green Lake Room

The first book is intentionally shorter, with more illustrations.  Interested readers can then learn more about the world of 2528 AD.


Book Two: Second Sister (Ariana’s origin story); the telling of the end of the age of Gringos, and the rise of Nuegua from Sean Landesten’s viewpoint.

  1. Pink Tamale
  2. The Rape of Clan Demetra (Yassah Learns His Checkers is incorporated here)
  3. The Furniture of Paradise (the core of the whole narrative; Sean Landesten’s story ends here)
  4. The Trader’s Bazaar
  5. Cholera Among The Jicarilla
  6. Business In New Alcazar
  7. The Treasure Of The Ramada Los Alamos
  8. The Sisters’ Brooch

Book Three: War In Heaven (Dianire-centric, but tying the first two books together)

  1. Lightning And Earth Mother: A Myth Of Clan Tiala
  2. The Warrior Guild
  3. Journey To Socorro
  4. The Return Of The Blue Nun (or The Laughing Sickness)
  5. The Flowery Wars (or Empty Earth Games)
  6. Flight To the Galiuro
  7. The Sky Wanderer’s Armory
  8. War In Clan Tiala
  9. Catching The Swarm
  10. Reunion
  11. Epilogue: I Will Tread The Earth Once More

Apocrypha: The Tall Tales of Don Genaro Sepulveda

Appendix One: The earliest versions of the story, scanned in from 1993-1994 documents.

Appendix Two: Image Galleries, using the Nuegua timeline.

Surprise: The Rise Of Pink Tamale


Ghost Sickness


All the guests had returned to their seats in the Green Lake Room; the weather was very hot, and a humid wind was blowing in from the Inland Sea, so  many had cut their perambulations short. Monk ushers had been told to make sure that the entire congregation was assembled for the second hour after mid-day.  Generous helpings of citrus fruit, ice-cold sangria, and steaming hot coffee were ready to refresh them.

Abbot Gaudentius moved to the dais, and the monk ushers sounded their bronze staff bottoms on the limestone floor.  “All rise to greet the Queen of New Spain,” he intoned.  The Queen walked slowly to the dais, wearing a different gown–a lighter, summery one–than during the morning.  The fabric was unmistakable Baca Silk, with embroideries in white, indigo blue,and cyan green.

There was more cohesion in the assembly now, Don Antonio thought.  Rumours had run rampant about what the rest of the short text would provide, but they all agreed it must be something both urgent and ominous.

Now Lieutenant Alphonso strode to the dais, alongside the Queen and Abbot. “The Queen has asked me to open this final chapter of the book for this august assembly.  Before I do, I will answer three questions that have been brought up by our own Spanish nobility, the Apache Traders, and the Western Bandits.”

“The first question is: how do we know that this document is real?  The answer is twofold.  Our mysterious Apache Trader related to us all the incidents of the entire book in detail to myself and Abbot Gaudentius, and we had our best scholar, Brother Zhiloguous Baca examine and cross-examine his evidence before we broke the seal.  He concluded that as bizarre as the story is, it was not beyond the realm of the Gringo technology of last days of the Crowded Earth.”

“Second, a royal seal of King Carlos Sepulveda cannot be counterfeited.  Within its finest quality red beeswax are threads of gold, designed in a pattern that includes a random calculation that is not repeated in any other seal.  Our late King was famous, or infamous, if you believe the Flagellantes, for secreting Gringo technical knowledge into his plans and fabrications. Be that as it may, once broken, the seal cannot be repaired.  Brother Zhilogous examined the pattern using lamps, mirrors, and magnifying lenses, and pronounced it legitimate.”

Lieutenant Alphonso continued, speaking to a rapt audience.  “The second question comes from the Apache Traders, who have a tradition as fierce warriors.  Why did Dona Dina let me live, and not just kill me along with all the other men, women and children? I believe she wished to send a message to New Spain, even though she never once spoke to me. That message is simple: keep your heads down in humility, and do not seek to replenish the Empty Earth.”

“The third question comes from the Western Bandits. Why include us in your great meeting at all? How can what that book contains make any difference to us, or our help to you?”

Lieutenant Alphonso saw many of the Western Bandits lean forward in their chairs, eager to hear his answer. “For that answer, it will be necessary for all of you to listen very carefully to the Queen as she reads this last section of the book.”

* * *

The fetish baked angrily in the sun of the Arizona morning. On its round face, three interlocking sickle moons of black hovered on a yellow background. Three weathered vulture skulls hung on ancient rawhide from the fetish, dryly twisting and clacking together in the hot gusty wind. Beyond it spread the necropolis of Paradise Valley, all blackened streets and crystal buildings at crazy angles like chandeliers turned upside-down.

Rintiala, lithe yet voluptuous, her pale blonde hair plaited down her back in a single braid, slung her recurved bow on her left shoulder and picked up her back pack with her powerful right grip.

“It isn’t fair,” Rintiala complained. “I shouldn’t be here at all; I should be home celebrating with my friends. With Dianire.”

“Rintiala, no one is arguing against your accomplishments,” her mother Alathea replied.  “But even you must obey the dictates of the Pregnant Virgin if you want to become a First Sister.”

“I want that more than anything else in all the Empty Earth,” she kept complaining. “But why here? With them? What kind of celebration is that?”

She walked up to the fetish, which was slightly taller than her, and begin to spread out her palms, measuring the width and height of the jaundiced sickle moons.

“Don’t touch them,” a voice said quietly behind her.  It came from a young Apache of medium height, with the sinewy chest and shoulders of a rock climber, standing feet apart on the Pima Highway, arms cradling his lever-action Winchester. “You’ll get Ghost Sickness,” he finished. His gaze turned away from hers as he turn and stared straight west down East McDonald Drive. “All these streets are made of carbo-crete; I’ve heard of it, but didn’t think it was real. Supposedly it protects itself if you step on it the wrong way.”

“Dont’ scare the girl, Hunts-The-Ruins,” an elderly Apache male said firmly.  Grizzled and scarecrow-thin, he walked slowly up behind the two. “Now, young woman, pay attention. No one handles anything unless I say so.” Rintiala responded by leaning as far as she could over the edge of the highway, her left hand not quite touching the fetish. The two males shuffled their feet for a moment, and the elderly Finds-Water spoke.”The yellow-and-black means death by Ghost Sickness. The three skulls are Western Bandit markings. Three attempts were made to pass through here, and they all failed. No one knows what kind of terrors they encountered.”

“Something only we Nueguans can handle,” Alathea, First of First Sisters, standing farther east than the other three, stated loudly. She challenged the city with a twist of her muscular neck.  She drew back her cloak of white and indigo stripes into which serpentine designs of bright cyan had been sewn.   “That’s why you’ve invited my daughter and I here.”

“Oh, Mother, Hunts-The-Ruins is just trying to impress me with his bravado. I can handle him,” she said. Rintiala sighed quietly. Who would be more trouble, Mother or these Apache males?

“Tell me this again, Rintiala,” Hunts-the-Ruins said, smirking.  “We’re going to step off safe ground, onto no-one’s land, and walk five and a half miles  of certain death to find something you’ve only seen in a dream?”

“I’ll know it when I see it, Hunts-the-Ruins. And I could run it–be there in twenty minutes–if you’d like. Twenty-five, with this pack.”

Finds-Water cautiously stepped a pace closer to the Fetish, then turned around and addressed the other three. “People, here’s how it is. We’ve got until noon to cross through Paradise Valley, get to the Sanctuary at Camelback Mountain, open it…”

“To see if my dream is true,”Rintiala quietly interrupted.

“…and return to this point.”Finds-Water finished.

Hunts-the-Ruins looked at the young woman. “We have an agreement with the Apache Police. They will keep the Western Bandits away from here until noon, but they won’t come looking for us if we don’t show.”

“Correction,” Alathea interjected. “They can’t come looking for us if we don’t show.”

” But the Apache Police will protect us from the Western Bandits if we get back? ” Rintiala asked.

” Just let me handle the Western Bandits,” Finds-Water answered. “If they wanted to kill us, we’d already be dead. ” He squared his narrow shoulders. ” All right people. “It’s one thousand feet to Agua Linda Park, our first checkpoint. On my mark. Hunts-the-Ruins, take point. Rintiala, you stay within a dozen feet of him, no matter what happens. Alathea, you and I will take up the rear. Go! ”

The young Apache firmly placed his foot on the desert soil that a century of westerly wind had packed along the west side of Pima Highway. Saguaro, prickly pear, yucca and barrel cactus all competed for space until they touched the violet blackness of the roadways that actually made up Paradise valley, roadways clearly of some Sky Wanderer material. His was the first boot to touch it, as he strode, head held high.

As she walked, Rintiala looked over the vegetation with a gardener’s eye. “Mother,” she said, ” Look at the barrel cactus, about every tenth one. What do you see?”

Alathea gazed across the scrub. ” Well done, daughter. They’re motiles and old-fashioned ones at that.”

“But, Mother,” Rintiala said insistently. “They weren’t in my dream.”

Rintiala felt spidery fingers walk across her shoulder blades. Was it the heat? Sweat poured off her, whisked away by her Nueguan poncho. Or was it more? Yes, it was more.

“We’re being watched,” she said.

“By who? I sure hope the Apache Police have binoculars and telescopes trained on us,” Hunts-the-Ruins queried. “It’s their job. Or maybe some Western Bandits are hiding in the chapparal? We’d smell them before we saw them,” the young Apache chortled.

Rintiala looked at him, scrunching her nose. “Maybe like the way you smell to me?”

He continued his jibes, obviously ignoring her. “Oh, I know, it’s those darn stupid Spaniards. They crossed the border into Apacheria, and then walked hundreds of miles, just to catch a glimpse of you.”

” What’s a motile?” Finds-Water asked Alathea.

“Something Nueguan, old and almost forgotten now,”said Alathea to Finds-Water without looking back. “We don’t use them much anymore than you still use dogs to carry packs.”

” But they’re not supposed to be here, are they? ”

” No they aren’t. Sky Wanderers wouldn’t know anything about them. Motiles were developed after the Sky Wanderers left Earth. ”

Vegetation, especially desert flowers, grew more thickly as they moved across the space separating Pima Highway from the Agua Linda gardens. If there were more of the mysterious motiles in these carefully tended gardens, Rintiala could not see them. Evidence of synthetic servitors was everywhere in the neat organization of desert plants, but she saw no humanoid-looking shapes that would give away Sky Wanderer technology.

They walked until they saw the edge of Agua Linda park. More desert vegetation, piled wild and high in embankments, surrounded a giant crystal machine the deepest hues of indigo and violet. Towering over a bubbling fountain of white marble, it looked like a dandelion about to open and spew forth seed. Rintiala noticed a red-and-silver Mandelbrot pattern spreading out from the base of the machine. One closer inspection she saw that it was the base of the machine. Interspersed between desert vegetation and more of the mysterious moties were caps and holes of various sizes dotted the fractal patterns like fruit on a cactus pear.

“Whatever this is, this is the small end, ” Rintiala said. “If this is a Mandelbrot, then a big heart-shaped curve of these machines should be circling all of Paradise Valley, but I can’t see anything west of here.”

“Well, the Sky Wanderers did leave in a hurry. Maybe it’s just some sculpture they couldn’t finish.” Finds-Water offered. “Okay, one hundred more feet and we’re in the center of Agua Linda. Then maybe Rintiala can get the bearings on her dream image.”

“At least no one’s died of Ghost Sickness yet,” Hunts-the-Ruins quipped.

“And just what exactly is this Ghost Sickness?” Rintiala asked.

“Traditionally, the Apache believe that you should never touch let alone use anything that a dead person has used. It makes their ghosts angry, and they will strike you down with illness and misfortune.”

” Correct,as far as it goes,” Finds-Water added. “But we aren’t ignorant savages, young woman. We White Mountain Apache–the most traditional of them all–believe that when you misuse those things given to you by the departed, then you suffer. If we actually believed what Hunts-the-Ruins told you, he wouldn’t be called Hunts-the-Ruins. He would be called ‘Shunned by Proper Apache Society’. Finds-Water smiled. “And I wouldn’t be considering him as a future son-in-law.”

“So, you’re not so prim and proper?” Rintiala asked Hunts-the-Ruins.

” I got my name by scrounging the outskirts of Old Phoenix, looking for glass. First, just bottles in the sand. Later whole sheets of the unbreakable stuff the Sky Wanderers made. And I never got sick–cursed–once.” Hunts-the-Ruins said.

When they came to the edge of the shade thrown by the Sky Wanderer’s artifact, Finds-Water motioned for them to stop. “Are you getting anything yet? “he asked Rintiala.

“No,”she said, staring off into the west. “But I can see the top of the Sanctuary from here.”

“So can I,” Hunts-the-Ruins said. “It doesn’t take a specially-trained Nueguan to do that. So we just march down East McDonald for four miles, make a short left, and knock on the door?”

“I’m doing the best I can. You don’t need to be so snippy.” Rintiala answered. “Wait a minute, don’t you think that it’s odd that this fountain is still flowing after four hundred years? She stepped away from the group to investigate, watching Finds-Water scratch his nose in exasperation from the corner of her eye.  Something touched her cheek and nose. Intent on the nearly-miraculous flowing water, she absent-mindedly brushed it away.

Hunts-the-Ruins sighed to no one in particular. “I should have stayed home and fixed irrigation pipes. This whole thing is just going to be a waste of time.”

“Just a minute here,” Alathea interrupted. “If my daughter…”

Rintiala placed her hands on the edge of the fountain, breathing in the smell of fresh water. If her eyes did not deceive her, there were ancient coins and jewels in the water, last wishes from departing Sky Wanderers. Suddenly her forearms itched. Ignoring it as nerves, she looked into the water again, only to see a head of dark hair hovering over her.  Thinking it her young Apache bodyguard, she turned to ask him to give her some space, but when she turned to challenge him, there was no one there.

And that was for the good. Frozen in surprise, Rintiala saw the ricochet scatter sand and gravel before she heard the shot. A piece of flying quartz sliced open the skin on Alathea’s left calf. Blood oozed out immediately.

“Hit the ground!” Finds-Water ordered, and they did.

“Get off our land, you god-damned injuns!” came a Gringo voice from the top of the largest artifact. Rintiala lifted her head up from the dust. Out of the cacti around the base of the artifact a large thickset young man emerged, wearing desert khakis pinned with sage, cradling a Sharp’s buffalo rifle. His hat was wide and floppy, and also nearly hidden under of a thatch of sage.

“No wonder we couldn’t smell him,” Alathea whispered. “Put your head down, daughter,” she hissed.

“Yeah, you Apache ain’t the trackers you used to be. Too much easy livin’, I reckon,” the Gringo said. Rintiala heard rather than saw his heavy boots march right up beside her head. ” Well, hello,” he said to Rintiala. “You sure don’t look like no Apache squaw I ever saw before. ” He squatted down beside her, and Rintiala glimpsed flaming red hair from the corner of her eye. “It’s all right, missy. You can get up now. Ol’ Carl ain’t about to hurt no one as pretty as you.”

Another shot rang out from artifact, this time only inches from Rintiala’s head.  She sneezed dust, and wished she could wipe her eyes, but she did not dare antagonize the shooter.

“You tell that bitch to stay down!” an angry, adenoidal male voice shouted.

“And you put that rifle away, or Seamus’ll have your hide, Zeb!” Carl shouted. “I mean it!”

“Come on, I was just playin’ with ’em,” the voice whined.

Carl got down on one knee, and offered Rintiala his hand. “Next shot’s gonna be me, shootin’ at Zeb,” he said to her quietly. “I meant it when I said no one’s gonna hurt you.”

Rintiala lift up her right arm, and held out her hand. No more shots were fired.  Carl clasped hands, and lifted her up easily, while she brushed dirt and sand from her travelling cloak. “The rest of you can get up. But no sudden moves, okay?” Carl said.

“I demand to speak to your headman,” Finds-Water said, lowering the pitch of his voice. “We have an understanding here.”

“Well, now, that’d be my uncle Seamus,” Carl answered. “But first, you folks take them backpacks off real slow and hand ’em over. The Winchester, too. Oh, and that bow.” He put two fingers in his mouth and whistled. From the bushes came a female mule covered in eucalyptus leaves and peppermint patches. “I’ll put them on Jenny here for safekeeping.”

Hunts-The-Ruins took his off first, with the other three following suit. Carl pointed his buffalo rifle at them, forcing the Apache and the Nueguans to step away while he picked up the backpacks and threw them over the mule’s back. He put their weapons in a leather bag slung on one side of her.

A daring and dangerous idea snuck into Rintiala’s head. “Come to think of it, it’s too hot for these Mothersilk cloaks,” Rintiala said aloud.  She put her arms over her head, bent at the waist, and wiggled it off, catching the cloak in one hand. Underneath she wore only a tight halter, iridescent green with pearl highlight, that had tiny pockets along its sides, and a short hiking skirt, with large pockets front and side. A large stripe of white inset with indigo ran diagonally from right shoulder to left breast. Her snakeskin boots ended just below the knee. She smiled at Carl, and he put his head down, averting her gaze.

“Woo-wee, sure am glad it was my day for border watch,” he said.

Rintiala walked over to him and looked him straight in the eye. “Here, Carl, put this in too. And you’ll be extra careful with my pack, won’t you?” She changed the subject. “I’ve never seen a–jenny–before. Does she bite? Can I pet her?”

“Daughter dear, just what do you think you’re doing?” Alathea asked.

“What needs to be done. If I have to, I’m going to the Sanctuary by myself, without Apache or Western Bandits, or anyone else, for that matter, looking over my shoulder. If I have to. Is that clear, Mother?”

“Outside of Nuegua you will address me as First Healing Sister,” Alathea shot back.

Rintiala switched to Sister Sign. “Agreed. But make no mistake. I plan to be a First–to wear the Cyan Dragon–when this is over,” her lean strong fingers said. “Firsts take risks. Just like you did.”

“To wear the Cyan Dragon,” Alathea signed back. “Your risks must succeed.”

A calculated risk,then“.

Rintiala smiled at her mother. She then noticed that Carl, Hunts-the-Ruins and Finds-Water were all staring intently at her hands. She turned to Carl, and gently touched his right hand which tightly clenched the pistol grip of his ancient buffalo rifle. “Let’s start again. I’m Second Healing Sister Rintiala of Clan Tiala, and I’m here to become a First Sister. Where I come from, that’s something like what your uncle Seamus does. It’s a very big step.”

Carl responded gingerly to her touch, spreading his fingers widely. “Well, I’m Carl Reineke, and I ain’t no Western Bandit like the Apache say. This here’s my home. And I’m right pleased to meet you, Rintilla.” He smiled, revealing a gap between his two front teeth.

“Rin–tee–a–lah,” Rintiala corrected him. “Remember, be very careful with my stuff. That’s where all the medicines are. Okay?”

Carl stepped back, spread his large boots firmly in the ground, and looked them all over. “Okay, but, I gotta put my foot down. You can’t just march into Paradise Valley any which way. This ain’t exactly a safe place for a picnic.”

“I had a dream that told me how to make this place safe.”

“What? Safe for Apache, so’s folks like me get pushed off their land?”

Rintiala moved a step closer, and touched Carl’s forearm, the one that cradled the buffalo rifle. Carl’s eyes began to squint, but Rintiala held his gaze. “No. I’m going to make this place safe for anyone who wants to live here. I’m a Healing Sister. That’s what we do.”

There was a silence, broken only by the soft crooning of the morning breeze. At last Carl spoke.

“Well, here’s how I see it. I think old folks–Gringo and Apache–made a lot of mistakes, and us younguns have to live in the mess they made. If it’s gonna get fixed, it’s us younguns gonna do it. So, the old Apache and your mom gotta stay here. That way when Seamus shows up, they can all talk about things. Meanwhile, you and me and this Apache buck here–he gestured with his buffalo rifle at Hunts-the-Ruins–we’ll fix what needs fixin’. You up for that, Buck?”

Hunts-the-Ruins never looked away from either Carl’s eyes, or the buffalo rifle. Rintiala’s estimation of him began to rise.

“Yeah, sure. But Rintiala is in charge. Not you or me. Okay?”

“Deal,” Carl said.

“Just wait a minute!” Finds-Water protested. “Carl, do you have any idea who I am?”

“Yup, you’re the top dog among the Apache Traders,” Carl smiled. “And when my uncle gets here, you can decide on how to punish me. Or maybe Zeb will shoot you first. But by then, Rintiala will have fixed everything, and I’ll be the new mayor of Paradise Valley.”

“Carl, it’s already really hot, and no one is supposed to meet us until noon.” Rintiala asked. “Can they have their packs back?”

“Well…what if they’ve got handguns in there? Cause a lot of trouble before Zeb takes ’em down, and then lots more trouble once they’re dead.”

“You can look if you like, but you’ve only got two hands, and they’re full. Or you can trust me.”

Another silence. Rintiala noticed that Hunts-the-Ruins was beginning to adopt a sand-posture, shifting his weight nearly imperceptibly, to prepare for hand-to-hand combat.

“Well, okay, I guess I promised I’d trust you,” Carl replied. “They can have their packs.”

Rintiala pushed it a little harder. She needed to see what this young man was made of. “And my mother will need my bow. The coyotes around here aren’t afraid of people.”

Now Carl laughed. “We like ’em that way. And hell, they’re nothin’. Wait ’til the desert wolves show up. Sure, she can have your bow.”

“It’s settled then,” Rintiala announced. She motioned to Finds-Water and Alathea to get their gear, and they slowly collected it up. The old Apache was granite-faced, but her mother’s  was a tightly controlled mask of repression. Not good for the next person who crossed her, Rintiala thought.


Middle Game
POV: Rintiala (close 3rd)

The three began to march west on East McDonald Drive.

“It’s best if I take point,” Rintiala said to. “If there’s any Sky Wanderer’s disease hanging around, I’ll be the one to handle it.”

Carl looked at her thoughtfully. Big and ungainly as he was physically, she sensed a sharp if uneducated mind under that sage-covered hat. “Whatever you do, don’t stare in any of the windows,” he said. “You can’t look for more than ten seconds, no matter what you see inside. Near as we can tell from the last disaster, ten seconds is all you’ve got, then the ghosts decide we’re trouble. Put your head down, if you see anything.”

“Like I said to Finds-Water,” Rintiala replied, “I don’t believe in ghosts.  I’ll do what I have to do.”

Carl turned to Hunts-the-Ruins, the jenny between them. “Beggin’ your pardon, Buck…”

“My name is Hunts-the-Ruins.”

“Okay, beggin’ your pardon, Hunter. Could you talk some sense into Rintiala?”

“Probably not,” Hunts-the-Ruins answered. “I’m just here to get my Trader certification.”

“I heard that,” Rintiala retorted.  She began to feel angry toward these two. “Carl, how come you’re suddenly so helpful, when just a few minutes ago you were shooting at us?” Rintiala asked.

“Weren’t me doing it, Rintiala,” Carl exclaimed, puffing at the effort of keeping up with the Nueguan girl. “I had to keep Zeb from winging Hunter here.”

“Who is Zeb?” Rintiala and Hunts-the-Ruins said simultaneously.

“That’s Uncle Seamus’ son, and he really, really hates Apaches. Uncle Seamus sent me here to keep a lid on things, and you’ve got to admit, nobody got hurt, when they could have.”

“Okay, I’m sorry. I’m new to all the politics between Apache and Western Bandits.” Rintiala replied.

“Come on, Rintiala,” Carl said in exasperation. “I already told you I’m not a Western Bandit.”

Rintiala was just about to clarify her statement, when more of the spider-webs floated across her nose.  Her sharp eyesite saw a tiny mite-shape moving among the fibers. Gently she caught it in the palm of her hand.

“Don’t pay no attention to that stuff,” Carl said, sounding eager to keep up a conversation. “Them’s just wind spiders. They don’t bite or nothin’.”

Rintiala looked more closely. There it was, the photosynthetic green stripe running down the little creature’s back. “It’s not a spider at all. It’s a motile spore,” she replied.

“Never heard tell of a motile before,” Carl answered. “You ever heard of that, Buck?” Carl asked Hunts-The-Ruins.

“Not until just this morning,” the young Apache replied. Rintiala glanced up to see him whip his head around, scanning the buildings. He stopped walking, and held up a hand. “Heads up everybody. It’s hard to see in the sunlight, but every sixth building has a red running-light, like it’s on standby. This place is supposed to be centuries dead, so that’s not a good sign.”

Carl and Rintiala both began to squint to penetrate this new mystery. “Well, doggone, he’s right,” Carl said. “It’s like there’s a blood-red line, real thin, all around the bottom of that building right there, the one with the shiny globe on top.”

“You mean the one with the sign that says: ‘The Ultimate Boutique’?” Rintiala replied.

“Well, shucks, Miss Rinnie, I reckon you can read and spell better than me.”

Rintiala’s gaze swept across the east windows of the Ultimate Boutique, bronze now in the morning sun.  The glare did not hide the shocking reality: inside, a young woman slender and pale with long dark hair, smiled and waved frantically at Rintiala.

“Carl, there’s someone in there,” Rintiala offered.

“Hunter! Rintiala! Don’t look!” Carl shouted, averting his gaze and lowering his bulk as if being shot at. “Stare at the ground!”

Rintiala got down on her hands and knees, gently allowing the tiny creature to scamper off her palm. A new realization hit her harder than heat of the desert sun. “This whole area is one big web. There’s millions of motiles and their threads on the ground, on the buildings, everywhere.  She looked up at Carl. “All of those so-called wind spiders are connected, and they allow someone or something to see everything that’s going on. We’re walking into a trap.”

“Are we going to grovel all day?” Hunts-The-Ruins asked. “Can’t we just retrace our steps and call the whole thing off?” he groaned.

“Just wait a minute,” Carl said. “Nothin’ happens in a minute, we’ll be okay. Them lights just spooked me, is all. Walked around here plenty of times.”

Now it was Rintiala’s turn to hold her hand up. “Gentlemen, I’m going to try to find a path that has the least number of motile spores and threads.  Use your peripheral vision, and follow me.”

“Okay,” both the men said, sighing.  Neither seemed very excited about following an order from her, she thought.

A strong and supple hand grasped hers at the wrist.  Thinking it to be Hunts-The-Ruins, Rintiala looked up, careful to divert her gaze from the Ultimate Boutique.  “I said follow me, not drag me, Hunts-The-Ruins.”  Only it wasn’t the Apache. The same young girl was standing above her, pulling her toward the building with one hand, gesticulating with the other, and speaking without making a sound.  Then Rintiala’s ears popped.

“Okay, Cy, I’ve got audio,” the young woman suddenly said in a musical soprano. “Please come with me. We’ve got to get you away from the Inferiors.”

“I’m not going anywhere with you!” Rintiala shouted.

“Who the hell are you talkin’ to?” Carl asked. “There’s nobody here but us three.”

“And why are you holding your arm like that?” Hunts-The-Ruins asked.

The young woman looked at Rintiala with the clearest blue eyes she had ever seen.  Her irises shifted from indigo to cyan. “You can’t enter the Sanctuary without me,” she said, her voice suddenly low and husky.  “These others will only make your journey harder. Trust me,” the new voice said.

In agony Rintiala couldn’t decide what to do next. How did this woman, or this waking dream, know who she was? How could this creature know about the Cyan Dragon, and what it meant to Rintiala?

“No! Rintiala! Keep your head down! Don’t look at nothin’!” Carl pleaded in vain.   The building began to light up as he watched in dismay.

Rintiala made her decision. With the solemn steps of a sleepwalker, she directed her steps to the opening doors of the Ultimate Boutique. From the corner of her eye, Rintiala watched as the two men froze in stunned silence.  “Don’t follow me, either of you.”

“Carl, we either run away, or we run to help her.” Hunts-the-Ruins said, seeming to Rintiala to be miles away.

“I’m goin’ to help,” Carl replied, dragging on the reins of his jenny, who wisely tried to resist. Hunts-the-Ruins broke into a run, doing his best to keep his eyes on the carbocrete.

The two men caught up to her quickly enough; the raven-haired woman looked over her shoulder at them in disdain. She threw her head back, and pulled harder on Rintiala’s wrist.

“I’m sorry, Hunts-The-Ruins; I’m sorry Carl Reineke. She’s right. This is the only way,” Rintiala said. The young woman-thing motioned to the sliding glass doors of the Ultimate Boutique. They opened with a hiss.

Something dark and evil emerged.

Darkness at desert noon.

POV: Finds-Water (distant 3rd)

“Keep your head down, bitch, or I’ll have to knick one of those pretty earlobes off,” the sniper taunted. Alathea slumped back down behind the stone bench that protected Find-Water and herself.

“Well here we are again, old man” she said. “Pinned down by Western Bandits, and no backup.”

“Trying to rush him won’t help. We don’t want to shed first blood.”

“Tell that to my leg.”

“That was a richochet. The Trader’s Council will still rule that we kept to our agreement.”

“You can sump your agreement with the Western Bandits. My daughter’s out there, and she’s in danger. That’s all I care about right now.”

Rintiala and her two men had barely gone a block when Alathea went to retrieve the bow and arrows. The sniper had fired a large caliber bullet with devilish accuracy, passing over her left shoulder, cutting off a lock of her hair. As she ran for cover, he fired shots only a finger’s length from her, demonstrating his control of the situation. Then the taunts began. Finds-Water was becoming weary of it, but not to the point of losing control of a situation the Apache Police would remedy in short order.

“Tell me something. If I can retrieve that bow and those arrows for you, will you at least wait until I give the order before you use them?”

“How can you ask me that? I’ve always followed your orders, even when I thought you were just a clueless old fart,” Alathea said grinning. She turned to look him in the eye. “No mayhem until you say so, agreed.”

“Finally someone listens to reason.” Just then a loud donkey braying broke the stillness after the last echoes of the gunshots were fading away, followed by high-pitched yips and growls, and in short succession, wolf howls. Finds-Water put up his hand. “I’ll get you that bow.”

He undid his shirt, and wrapped tightly around his scrawny waist was a pearlescent-blue rope of Mothersilk. “Gift from the Clan of Builders,” he said. “I need you to be my eyes without getting your head shot off. Can you do that?”

Alathea crawled on her hands and knees to the north side of the bench, her face nearly touching the dirt. A bullet whizzed in front of her hands, kicking back dust into her face. “I’m getting very tired of him,” she said coughing.

“So?” Finds-Water asked.

“The bow is straight ahead of us, about ten paces,” she said. She looked at the lariat in his hands, and then peeked around the side of the bench again. Another bullet, this a few finger-lengths away–just to show the sniper was still paying attention–kicked up dust. “You’re going to fetch my bow with a blind overhand toss?” Alathea asked.

Finds-Water pulled out the lariat end of the rope, and rubbed the loop against itself furiously. It responded by twisting and turning, extruding tough bristles that gleamed with thick liquid.

“This stuff will dry in a few minutes, so we’ll only get a couple of tries. Here goes.”

Finds-Water duck-walked away from the bench, and began swinging  the lariat on a low circle, not quite touching the sand. He then flicked it over his right shoulder. It landed with a sticky thud.

“Hah, hah, ain’t you desperate now?” the sniper jeered.

Alathea squeezed her thumb and forefinger together. “You missed by that much.”

“Just getting my range,” Finds-Water said quietly. He swung the lariat more vigorously, sweat beginning to pour off his brow. Finally he flicked his right arm and wrist in the air over the bench, for a second exposing them to the sniper. Finds-Water could see the dust wave as the bullet passed through the center of the lariat. Again it landed with a thud, but this time he could hear it dragging something along with it on the dirt. A bow and arrows.

“Damn!” the sniper yelled. Several shots rang out, all true to their mark, but Alathea’s muscular arms brought in the rope in an eye-blink. Soon she was checking her weapons.

“Black powder and lead balls are no match for Mothershell,” she said, plucking the bowstring, and checking the fletch on the arrows.

“We’re going to come out now,” Finds-Water shouted to the sniper. More shots were fired, but none kicked up dust near the bench, and the sniper did not respond.

Alathea peeked over the top of the bench. No shots, though gunfire could be clearly heard a block away.

“Time to tempt Fate,” Finds-Water said. “I’m going to stand up, and you can fire at will Alathea.” He stood up behind the bench, an easy target. But nothing happened.

Alathea ran to the nearest artificial flower, slinging the bow onto her back as she moved. While she picked up speed, she pulled Nueguan climbing gloves out of the deep pockets of her hiking skirt, and lifted herself up by main strength along the stem of the flower. Finds-Water walked slowly and deliberately down the center of East MacDonald.

“He’s gone! Where’d he go?” came Alathea’s voice from the artificial flower.

“Look just west of the flower, near the base. You’ll see an artificial hill, with a circular door just large enough for a young man. The crack will be hairline thin.”

“Yeah, I see it,” Alathea replied. “But how am I supposed to flush him out?”

“You don’t need to. We need to figure out what pulled him away. What can you see from up there?”

“Some overdone building just lit up. Ah, I see it. Your friend Carl is looking really sick, and his jenny is trying to fight off a pack of coyotes.”

“Don’t worry about the coyotes. Do you see any wolves?”

“Wait a minute. Yeah, just to the north. All I can see are noses and paws sticking out of the scrub.”

“Follow my directions to the letter. Put an arrow in the jenny’s eye, then kill the first two coyotes that come up to claim it. Forget about Carl, he’s probably dead already.”

“Done.” Three green-feathered Nueguan arrows–each made of one piece of Mothershell–flashed out between the petals of the artificial flower. The jenny went down screaming, and two medium-sized coyotes leaped to the opportunity. They died as the Nueguan arrows passed through their throats, dead before they hit the ground. “Now what?”

“Just wait.” A moment of silence. The sun was getting hotter by the minute, Finds-Water thought. “Cover me.” He began to stride briskly toward the dying jenny. As he arrived at the scene of the mayhem, he noticed that the doors of the Ultimate Boutique were tightly sealed, though lights were still on inside.

Finds-Water stooped just beside the dead body of Carl and faced north. Cooly, he watched the last agonies of the jenny, waiting for the silver-grey snouts and paws to materialize into the desert wolves. After a moment the alpha male made its way out of the tunnels the pack had dug in the scrub, and stalked toward the old Apache. Two of its confederates flanked it, one on each side. They stopped less than a dozen paces from Finds-Water. The lead animal looked Finds-Water in the eye and growled a challenge. Finds-Water merely tipped his head toward Alathea’s location; that was enough. The alpha male barked twice, and the confederates each ran up and grapped a dead coyote, dragging them backwards into the scrub. Finds-Water pointed his right hand toward the sun, and his left toward the jenny. He then bent his right wrist back fifteen degrees, all the while never losing his eyeball connection with the alpha male. The wolf growled deeply, and then never turning around, stalked backwards in the scrub, until only its snout could be seen, lounging in the tunnel.

Alathea climbed down from the flower and ran up beside Finds-Water. “Would you like to tell me just what happened, you crazy old Apache, or are you going to give me myths and legends?”

“Those are spirit wolves, protectors of this place. The big one understands that we are here for some monumental change, and we negotiated. Two dead coyotes for now, the jenny after we are gone.”

“You know what I think? I think that they’re genetically engineered SuperDogs that went wild. Standard Sky Wanderer attack animals.”

“Both points of view are true, Alathea. But to more pressing matters. Your daughter is inside that building, and we have to get her out.”

“How? I say first we check the medical supplies in the packs, and then figure out what disease is loose. Here, help me.  Even I can’t roll this jenny over by myself.”

“As you wish.” Finds-Water assessed the situation. The jenny had fallen on the medical packs, and likely a good portion of the highly reactive Nueguan medicines were ruined. The Winchester, on her upright side, was unharmed. He pulled it out of the leather bag, and drew back the lever, checking action and barrel. “All right, now we’re both armed.”

Alathea squatted down and hooked her arms on the downside of the jenny’s quarter, near the stifle. “Um, whenever you’re ready, old man.”

Finds-Water hooked his arms under the shoulder and together he and Alathea heaved. The jenny, still twitching, flopped over to the opposite flank. Alathe quickly put her hands into the saddle bag, coming out with three pouches wrapped in the cyan-and-white of the Healer’s Guild. She opened the largest pouch, made a face, and flung it aside. “The general-purpose salves are useless, their vials are broken.”

She took out the smaller second pouch, pulled out a translucent tube of crystalline Mothershell, and peeked into its depths. Immediately she wrapped it up. “The good news. The Little Doctors are fine. But they won’t last long in the heat, not after I’ve had to expose them to the sun.”

She opened the last pouch and made another face. “The jenny landed on the Motherfruit and squished it good.”

“No aphrodisiacs tonight, I’m afraid,” Finds-Water noted.

Alathea tossed the last statement off with a wave of the hand. “If your information is correct, the only thing Rintiala has to worry about are Sky Wanderers diseases in that building. The synthetics don’t have offensive weapons. Right?”

“That’s the Western Bandit story, and they paid a high price to find out.”

“Let’s examine Carl, then.” She walked over to his prone body. His hat had been thrown off, and he lay spread-eagled on his back. She put an index finger into his mouth, yanked out piece of black and bloody phlegm, smelled it, then swished it around in her mouth before spitting it out.

“So?” Finds-Water asked.

“Standard Black Bear aerosol, airborne lifespan of three minutes, radius one hundred paces, unless there’s stiff wind. Rintiala and I were inoculated for this back in Clan Tiala. No problem, and luckily no problem for you, either. It’s deactivated.”

“Well that’s good news.” Finds-Water said quietly. He was about to form a new plan of action when a shot rang out from another artificial flower further west. He felt a burning pain in his back, just above his left kidney, then watched with horror as the lead ball emerged from his abdomen, taking half a handful of flesh with it. “Alathea…” was all he was able to say.

“That one’s for Carl, you sons-of-bitches!” Zeb screamed.

Powerful hands gripped Finds-Water’s undamaged right side and lowered him down gently, using the jenny for cover.  They ripped the bloody remains of his shirt away. “Stay awake, old man. The more conscious help you can be the better. He heard something like glass twist and snap, and then small warm wet things began to crawl into the hole made by the black-powder weapon.  He saw some of them clamp their vice-grip jaws onto spurting veins and arteries, quickly arresting the flow of blood.

“That’s better,” Alathea’s voice said from behind him. Now a powerful right hand began to squeeze termite guts onto the outer surface of the wound. Where the gunk landed, it began to writhe and spread, forming a ghostly white second skin over the torn-up hole.  “Old man, I’d like for us to wait here until the Little Doctors are finished working, and the boutique door opens, but we’re too exposed. I’m going to tie you onto my back and haul you out of here.”

“Where are we going?” Finds-Waters asked weakly. Suddenly he felt the most enormous thirst. Without asking, Alathea put a canteen to his lips.

“Sump your agreement. This is first blood. We’re going to take the battle to them. All of them.”

POV: Hunts-The-Ruins (close 3rd)

Hunts-the-Ruins awoke flat on his back. A large black bear clamped its jaws around his larnyx as it prepared to rip out his Adam’s apple. He closed his eyes and began to chant his death song.

In a moment when he opened them again, Rintiala’s face was inches from his own. “You think a black bear is trying to eat your lungs. It’s a hallucination. Open your mouth.”

Hunts-the-Ruins did as instructed. Rintiala’s lips pressed tightly to his and her tongue slid around in his mouth, probing deeply. He couldn’t control the phlegm that he hacked up. Rintiala didn’t stop kissing him. Instead she methodically swallowed the bloody mess.

Rintiala straddled him, arms over her head, busily removing her halter top. The black bear landed on him again, this time even more adamant about dining on his lungs. Images of Rintiala’s face interwove with the bear’s drooling tongue and yellow teeth.

“Open your mouth, and suck. Don’t get he-manly with me either. You’ve got about five minutes to live.” A broad pink nipple found its way into Hunts-the-Ruin’s mouth. He sucked greedily, a frightened child.

Pearlescent magical smoke flowed from the nipple, down his windpipe into his lungs. As it flowed, the image of the black bear began to vanish the way a drawing disappears under the artist’s eraser. He sucked even harder.

“Careful there. Remember, you’ve got teeth,” Rintiala complained.

The bear reared on its hind legs, arched, and fell backwards, disintegrating into curlicues of light as it did so. The nipple pulled out, to be replaced by another. Now Hunts-the-Ruins could see himself on the floor inside the entrance of the Ultimate Boutique, surrounded by gently flashing commercial displays. A sweat-soaked and topless Rintiala held him down with her powerful thighs while she massaged his chest.

She rolled off him, quickly moving behind, helping him to his feet, her hands under his armpits. “Try to walk and act normally. I distracted the sales girl, but not for long.”

“What happened?” It hurt to say two words.

“You were sprayed with a generic Sky Wanderer’s disease. You are one lucky Apache.”

“Why?” It hurt to say even one word.

“Because it could have been anything, instead of the old standby Black Bear. It makes you hallucinate while it destroys your lungs. Mother and I prepared for the standard ones before we left Nuegua. Just in case.”

“Just in case,” Hunts-the-Ruins croaked. “Who did it?”

“I saw some kind of waking dream that the motiles were transmitting: a girl with long black hair. Her name is Tili.  She told me I had to trust her if I wanted to get into the Sanctuary at Camelback Mountain. Once I got inside, I found out she is a synthetic.  She’s some kind of sales girl, and she’s a complete bubblehead. She doesn’t remember a thing about what she supposedly said outside.”

“You’re saying I was nearly killed by a pretty young girl trying to make a sale? Her presentation needs a lot of work,” Hunts-The-Ruins croaked, coughing.

Rintiala leaned across his left shoulder and smiled. “I didn’t know you Apache had a sense of humor. That’s a good sign.” Her smile faded, concern lines forming around her mouth. “I’ve fed you the raw antidote: my breast milk. Apache need to have it diluted. It could affect your judgement.” Rintiala looked up, past Hunts-the-Ruins, and put her finger to her lips.

Hunts-the-Ruins, heeding Rintiala’s admonition to act normally, looked up to see a tall slim man, or at least a synthetic thing that looked like a man, walk over to the two of them.

The man had a badge on his shirt pocket that read: “Cy. Security.” He looked over the Nueguan and the Apache and said in a clipped voice. “What seems to be the problem here? I’ve got a report about an Inferior invading the premises.”

The curvaceous young woman synthetic, now wearing a muumuu and a large fresh-cut hibiscus flower behind her right ear, ran up behind Cy. “Oh! I’m so sorry!” Tili exclaimed, putting a well-formed hand to her perfectly round mouth. “I set the alarm off.”

Cy stepped closer to Rintiala and examined her slowly, his eyes unfocussing. “Well, this one’s a Sky Wanderer, and an Advanced one at that. You gave her an open house account, I presume?”

“Don’t you think I know how to do my job?” Tili replied.

“Well, did you or didn’t you?”

Tili produced a gold card from behind her left ear, like a Gringo card trick Hunts-the-Ruins had once seen. “It’s right here.”

“Well, give it to her then.”

Tili proferred the card and Rintiala accepted it with a gracious ‘thankyou’.

Cy now directed his attention to Hunts-the-Ruins. The Apache felt he was being sized up by a rattlesnake, for all the human warmth that Cy radiated.

“And this must be the gentleman you thought was an Inferior. He registers as an earlier Sky Wanderer model, that’s all,” he said, turning to Tili. Looking over to Rintiala, Cy said: “You’re quite young, and probably haven’t seen the shock a Translation from Asteroid body to Earth body can cause. Nothing out of the ordinary.”

“That’s it exactly,” Rintiala said.

Cy wagged a finger at the synthetic sales girl. “Now, Tili, don’t go using the nuisance protection just because there are different kinds of Sky Wanderers. That’s very rude.”

Tili put her beautiful head between her hands, her ebony hair shaking loose, all the way down to her waist. “I’m so sorry.” She peeked one eye through her fingers. Rintiala supported Hunts-the-Ruin’s weight against her chest, while Tili made cooing noises to the Apache.

“You’ll have to be patient with Tili,” Cy explained. “She’s programmed for frivolity; it helps make sales.”

He extended a hand to Rintiala. “Am I right in my assessment of you? You are presently nineteen years old, with a lifespan of one-hundred twenty years, menarche beginning at twelve, menopause at eighty?”

“Correct,” Rintiala replied. She squeezed Hunts-the-Ruins’ left arm, a gesture for silence.

“You appear to have a proactive immune system, connected to your mammary glands. You are in lactation, although you’re still a virgin. That’s very interesting. There’s no mention of that in my files.”

“Cy!” Tili cried. “And you say that I’m rude!” She turned her head to Rintiala. “Tell that big creep to apologize!” she insisted. Rintiala gently patted her hand in response.

“Yes, it’s a new feature,” Rintiala added.She began to turn with Hunts-the-Ruins toward the entrance of the Ultimate Boutique.

Cy went on, oblivious to her body language, Hunts-the-Ruins thought. “And practical,” the synthetic prattled. “Who knows what kind of biological surprises the Sky Wanderers will find when they return from the asteroids? I assume you two are part of an Advanced party?”

Hunts-the-Ruins just wanted to get out of this place of madness. “An excellent way of putting it, Cy. I’ll be sure to put in a good word for you to the rest of the Sky Wanderers.”

“But you haven’t actually answered my question,” Cy replied in a light tone. “Will we need to prepare for a large group tonight? Tommorrow? Almost nothing organic is ready.”

“We’ve got to get going,” Rintiala insisted, pulling Hunts-the-Ruins with her toward the door.

Cy had a pained look on his face to Hunts-the-Ruins eyes. “Yes, but where? We have to turn down sheets, arrange flowers, that sort of thing…”

“We’re going to be staying at the Sanctuary on Camelback Mountain. We’ve got reservations.” Rintiala replied.

If Cy could have crossed his eyes at her statement, Hunts-the-Ruins wouldn’t have been surprised. “The Sanctuary! My goodness, no, it’s been out of commission for over a century…and…”

“What Cy is trying to say is that it is haunted, and he’s a little embarassed by the whole thing. Aren’t you, Cy-sweety?” Tili interrupted.

“Haunted?” Both Rintiala and Hunts-the-Ruins asked.

“Well, yes, there’s been some corruption in its networks, and for the life of me I can’t find it. You won’t tell upper management, will you? They might deactivate me for having left it go for so long.”

Now Hunts-the-Ruins put his finger to his lips. “Not a word.”

Cy began pacing back and forth, his hands behind his back. “Perhaps this is the perfect time to clear this haunting business up once and for all. Tili, would you please accompany them to the Sanctuary?”

“Would I?” Tili said bouncing on her tiptoes. She stopped Cy by placing her hands on his shoulders, and kissing him on the cheek. “Come on Rintiala, come on you big hunk of Apache cuteness, we’re going for a stroll.” She made a flourish and the door hissed open.

Hunts-the-Ruins shrugged his shoulders, a silent message to Rintiala to let go of him. Just as she was doing so, Tili stopped her. “But what am I thinking? Rintiala, you can’t go out in public like that. I mean, topless is soooo tasteless!”

“Well go get my top, then, the striped blue one.”

Tili looked around then under a few display counters. “I don’t see it anywhere,” she said, biting her lower lip.

“Then find me something. This is the Ultimate Boutique, isn’t it? I’m in a bit of a hurry. I have to meet a ghost you know,” Rintiala winked at Tili. “They can’t be kept waiting.”

Tili let out a hoot. “Not a problem. I’ve got a silk sash that will work. It’s a bit daring…but..with your figure…I’m sure no one will complain.”

“All right.” Rintiala lifted her arms over her head, and Tili pulled a sash of the sheerest ice-cream colored silk around the young Nueguan’s bosom. Hunts-the-Ruins watched as Tili tied a double knot of machine-quality precision.

“You know, Rintiala, if I weren’t synthetic and a female, I’d go after you myself,” Tili giggled.

Rintiala turned around, checking the knot in the body-length mirrors on each side of the main doors. “We’re going now.”

“But not without a group photo,” Cy insisted.

Hunts-the-Ruins could see a pained expression in Rintiala’s face as the trio stood in front of the main doors for their shot. Cy brought out an old-fashioned camera that seemed quite large and ungainly to Hunts-the-Ruins eyes, but then, he hadn’t specialized in either optics or computers in university. Who could tell what kind of idiosyncracies these synthetics had developed over the centuries?

“Say cheese,” Cy smiled.

“Okay, Cy, we’re really, really going now,” Tili said. With that she took Rintiala and Hunts-the-Ruins in arm and they walked into the midmorning sunlight of Paradise Valley. “The first thing we’re going to do is play with the puppies”.

All three stopped motionless. Not more than two strides away, a pack of coyotes had descended on Carl’s dead form. His face was ashen, and his eyes had rolled back into his head, leaving only the whites exposed. He had swallowed his own tongue in the last agonies of Black Bear. The jenny lay dead, the backpacks gone, the weapons also. A Nueguan arrow, green-feathered and chased in silver, stuck out of her eye socket. Oddly, the coyotes stayed clear of the dead mule. Finds-Water and Alathea were nowhere to be seen.

Rintiala crouched down beside the jenny, ignoring the coyotes. She brushed her hand over some blood drying on the carbocrete, and lifting up her fingers, smelled them testily. “This is very bad, Hunts-the-Ruins. Finds-Water has been seriously injured.” She stood up and gazed across the sand and scrub that led to the closest artificial flower. “She’s carrying him along with supplies and weapons. That means she’s very, very angry.”

“Are there other Advanced with you?” Tili asked, stepping daintily around the bodies. “We’ve had quite a problem with Inferiors lately. I’ll get Cy to clean this up.”

“Don’t bother,” Rintiala said.

“Well, at least let me get rid of the animals,” Tili replied. She gestured. Voices rising in pitch began to speak from the carbo-crete, first going through and then past the human range. The coyotes began to writhe and yelp, moving away reluctantly, eager to enjoy the feast of new flesh. Finally they ran off, looking for another kill.

Hunts-the-Ruins looked at Carl’s corpse. He no longer saw a Western Bandit, or even a Gringo. Just a poor man who had trespassed a possession of the Sky Wanderers.

Rintiala took Hunts-the-Ruin’s arm. “Won’t that Zeb start shooting at us out in the open?”

“Oh, that nasty boy, you mean?” Tili asked. “Don’t worry about him.  I’ve added a slight electric charge to all the roofs.  Things are going to get very jumpy up there.” Tili had no sooner said that, when she was answered by a rifle shot a block away.

“Did you hear that?” Hunts-the-Ruins said to Rintiala. “That long whistle at the end of the shot means it’s a Sharp’s Buffalo rifle.  Black power,  lead ball. Not the best gun, but easy to maintain.”

“Why would I care?” Rintiala huffed. Another shot came from the same general area, this time short and barking like a dog.

“Because that’s my Winchester, and I’ll bet that’s your mother returning fire.  Is she any good?”

“If Zeb so much as hangs a thumb out in view, she’ll shoot it off.  But she mostly likely try to put a bullet right down the barrel of his Sharp’s Buffalo Rifle.”

“She can do that?” Hunts-the-Ruins asked in amazement.

“You brought your mother with you?” Tili asked. “Oh, Rintiala that’s just so warm and homey.”

“You haven’t met my mother yet,” Rintiala answered.

“Great, they can keep each other busy. I’m going to charge your mother for all the spent shells. Brass costs money.” Hunt-the-Ruins said.He took Rintiala by the arm. “Let’s go,” he said. His anger rose as he thought of what these people–Nueguans and Sky Wanderers alike–did to those they considered lesser beings. “You’ve got a lot of explaining to do,” he said gruffly to Rintiala.

“And I will. But first things first,” Rintiala replied, hurt in her voice. She turned to the synthetic woman. “Tili, my boyfriend and I are having relationship problems right now. We need to talk, with nobody listening. Why don’t you go ahead of us?”

“Sure,” Tili said brightly. “I’ll meet you in the park area just in front of the Sanctuary. One block south, and one block west of here. That’s where my puppy lives.” With that Tili began to dance down the street, twirling and picking up speed as she did so. Flower shops, bakeries, restaurants, bistros, antique shops, book and vid stores, all began to light up. Paradise Valley was awakening.

As Tili’s form receded into the distance, Hunts-the-Ruins could see that she had abandoned even the pretense of having womanly bones and hips. Her strides became too elastic for any human, even he supposed, a Nueguan.

“I don’t like any of this at all. It’s too easy,” Rintiala said to Hunts-the-Ruins as they walked away from the corpses. “Tili just happens to show up as soon as we figure out how to deal with the Western Bandits, then gets us a pass key to the Sanctuary with the blessing of the security synthetic, and now shoos away coyotes. What else can she do? And why is she helping us?”

Hunts-the-Runs sighed in relief. “I am so glad you’re talking like this. I was sure Tili had fooled you completely.”

Rintiala raised an eyebrow. “I’ve been dealing with artificial intelligences my whole life, Hunts-the-Ruins. Tili’s no different.”

Alathea looked over the top of the last artificial flower. She stood still for a moment, nostrils flaring. Trying to smell the enemy out, Finds-Water thought.

“As of right now, old man, I think your agreement with the Western Bandits isn’t worth the shit it’s printed on.” She sat back, stroking her bow.

“If you go out with blood in your eye, you’ll kill a few Western Bandits. That I’m sure of. And they’ll kill your daughter. It’s that simple,” Finds-Water replied between gasps, trying to find a way to sit that didn’t make him lose consciousness.

“Well, then tell me what I’m supposed to do, but don’t tell me to do nothing. As a matter of fact, start telling me the truth about this whole affair, or maybe I’ll offer you in trade for my daughter’s safety.”

“You would do that. All right then, the whole story, or at least as much as I know of it. I haven’t had to a chance to speak with the synthetics, so I’ll have to guess as to their motives. Fair enough?”

“Fine,” Alathea said, hunkering down in the base of the flower.

“Now I know how much of a hard-headed practical type you are,” Finds-Water began, “but I have to speak in metaphor.”

“Just keep it short.”

“All right then. The whole thing is best viewed as a game of four-way poker. The Sky Wanderers are leading with the strongest hand, followed by you Nueguans, then my Apache, and trailing at the end…”

“The Western Bandits, with the weakest hand. And they know it.”

“But when you join a high-stakes game, you should always ask yourself: ‘Why now?'”.

“Because Rintiala had a dream in the Grotto of the Sacred Virgin…”

“Yes, your not-quite-a-secret organic artificial intelligence. Anything you dream there is recorded in full.”

“And all the Sisters could replay it and analyze it. I was one of the first to do so. Are you trying to tell me I didn’t do my job?”

“What I’m trying to tell you is that you’re so good at your job, and so immersed in your work, that you didn’t lift your head up to see the whole game being played. Who created that dream? It wasn’t Rintiala. Your Sisters can prove that.”

“You’re saying it came from here? How?”

“I don’t know. But the timing of it convinces me that some great change is due on the Empty Earth. You Nueguans are ready to burst from your cocooon. And Rintiala is about to become the first butterfly.”

“You’re mixing metaphors, old man. Stick to poker.”

“You’ve now got a card on the top of the deck. And Rintiala is the next to draw. Something wonderful, something horrendous, is going to happen to your daughter today. And when it does, Nueguans will be playing the strongest hand. The Western Bandits will be forced to fold. But we Apache want to play to the end, because we believe the synthetics will decide it is in their best interests to align themselves with the new winners.

“Finds-Water, I’ve only played poker with you a few times, and then only for diversion, when we ran out of Mother fruit. Make your explanation a little clearer, please.”

“The synthetics of Paradise Valley were the Sky Wanderer’s crowning achievement in artificial intelligence. They’re non-violent, they have a sense of humor, but above all, they know how to look out after their own synthetic interests. And that means aligning themselves with the best and strongest of the organics. That combination is Nueguan and Apache.

“Finds-Water, there are only ten thousand Nueguans, and then only one thousand of the Healer Clan. There are going to be millions of returning Sky Wanderers.”

“Who aren’t due back for a least a century. That’s five generations if you breed freely.”

“With who?” Alathea asked. “Oh no, you don’t mean…”

“Of course that’s what I mean. You’ll toss your silly taboo about intermarriage with other humans, and you’ll create a new race of Apache/Nueguan hybrids.”

“So, the goal of today is to enslave Nueguan women, to bring back the good old days of female servitude, living only to have babies?”

“Or have the Sky Wanderers wipe all of us out. Yes, that’s what I’m saying.”

“That’s it,” Alathea hissed. “I’m going to hand you over to the Western Bandits, right now.”

Finds-Water leaned over, and gasping with pain, handed Alathea the Winchester butt-first. “There’s one last thing I need to you do.”

“What? Shoot you?” Alathea asked, grabbing the rifle. “Where’s all that Apache nobility?”

“Right where it’s always been,” Finds-Water replied, “With the safety of my people. What I want you to do is to shoot someone for me.”

“My pleasure,” Alathea grinned, canines showing. “Who?”

POV: Hunts-The-Ruins (close 3rd)

“What do you mean Tili is no different?”

Rintiala crossed her arms across her chest, and appeared to be closely examining the carbocrete as they walked. “All artificial intelligences love to play games. That’s the world they came from. They never answer questions directly, even if you think they are. That’s their joy in life.”

“Joy? A machine?” Hunts-the-Ruins answered.

“You Apache. You learn how to make methane from buffalo shit, to drive your piston-powered trucks, and you think you’ve got technology all figured out. Tili is a person, Hunts-the-Ruins. She’s a she–not an it–and she’s more devoted, more self-sacrificing, and more loyal than any human you’ll ever meet. Just like the Pregnant Virgin of the Grotto.”

“Rintiala, Finds-Water specifically forbid me to ask you any questions about Nueguan technology, and now you’re giving out answers freely?”

“Not because you’d misuse the information, but because it would confuse you. You probably think we should have gunned down Tili and Cy the first chance we got, and be done with them.”

“Not me. I’d let the Apache Police do that.”

“Who would understand the situation even less than you do.”

“Then tell me what the situation is. My poor civil engineer’s brain will attempt to keep up.”

“There’s something or someone in the Sanctuary who sent me my dream. Tili and Cy can’t locate them, which means they’re not synthetics. But they can’t be living humans either, because Cy’s old-fashioned camera would have tracked them down.”

“And you think…”

“Whoever made Nuegua in the first place left a piece of themselves behind in the Sanctuary, waiting until I showed up in the Grotto of the Pregnant Virgin. More than that, Tili and Cy can’t just barge in looking for traces. Whatever it is can confuse their synthetic minds enough to be perceived as a ghost. The Sanctuary is haunted, all right.” She looked up from the carbocrete, her face a mask of concern. “Any more questions?”

“Just one. Why did you save me and not Carl?”

Rintiala smiled out of the corner of her mouth. “And I was going to ask you that question: why were you worth saving?”

“Superior stock, I suppose.”

“Maybe. My body decided that you could be hidden by my milk. Not Carl. Sorry, but that’s how we Healers work. It’s not about thinking; it’s all intuition.”

“That makes me want to ask another question: Why did Cy think I was a Sky Wanderer?”

“I thought you would have figured that out by now,” Rintiala sighed. “We Nueguans are the antidote to the Sky Wanderers. And we can mimic them.”

“So we’re safe now?”

“No. Not since Cy took that group photo. And probably my top. He’s got my entire bloodline–all the Nueguan DNA back to the first of us–analyzed by now. Subterfuge isn’t going to work. And what Cy knows, Tili knows.”

Rintiala stopped, looking to the south for a sign of Tili. She put her hand on Hunts-the-Ruins chest and said: “And now it’s time for my last question: why are you of all people here? I thought you were just some Apache stud bodyguard who would get killed in the first ten minutes, and that’s almost what happened. But then you bounced back, faster than any human outside of Nuegua. Whatever you are, you’re not what you appear.”

“I’m Phoenix Apache,” Hunts-the-Ruins replied.

“There are seven Apache tribes, none of which is named Phoenix,” Rintiala answered.

“If I survive today, I’ll be named an Apache Trader. And once that happens, there will be a Phoenix tribe of Apache, with full rights and honors.”

“Ah,” Rintiala said, “But until then, you and all your people are outsiders, not quite fitting in anywhere. Thanks, I’ve got my answer. Now let’s not keep Tili waiting.”

The two of them made the final left turn. Ahead lay the grounds and buildings of the Sanctuary, Camelback Mountain rising in the background. An adobe fence with a wrought-iron gate ringed the entire complex, wide, but not especially high. More cosmetic than protective, Hunts-the-Ruins thought.

Half a block away, Tili twisted her neck to the right, and spoke. “I can’t find my puppy anywhere.”

“Well, what’s the problem?” Rintiala asked.

“I used my dog whistle, but he didn’t respond.”

Hunts-the-Ruins heard a skittering sound behind him, and turned to see a silver-grey shape fly past him. It materialized into the largest wolf he had ever seen. The wolf ran up to Tili, put its paws on her chest, and began licking her face.

“Puppy!” Tili cried. “Did you miss me? Did you miss your Tili-kins?”

Rintiala picked up speed and ran to Tili. The wolf stopped licking Tili and ran over to Rintiala, whining and barking as it did so. It circled the stationary Nueguan girl more and more tightly until it stopped with its snout sticking in her crotch.

Hunts-the-Ruins walked slowly up to the scene. The wolf began to growl in short puffs. The Apache stopped in his tracks.

“He says you must stay a dozen paces behind Rintiala. He says it’s for your own safety,” Tili told Hunts-the-Ruins.

“Not a problem,” the Apache answered. “He’s a spirit wolf,” he said to Tili.

“No, silly, he’s a SuperDog.” Tili answered, walking over and nearly climbing on top of the animal so that she could scratch him behind his ears. The animal sighed softly, clearly in bliss. “He really likes this,” Tili said to Rintiala.

“Well, he may be a SuperDog, but the accent is on dog,” Rintiala answered, backing away a little. The wolf or whatever he was lifted his head and barked twice. Hunts-the-Ruins began to get the eeriest perceptions from the sounds the animal was making.

“Rintiala, the spirit-wolf or SuperDog can talk,” Hunts-the-Ruins said.

“Well of course he can,” Tili said, giving the animal a hug. “It’s in the overtones. They carry much farther than human speech. He can talk to the rest of the Puppies right across town when he needs to. Can’t you, my puppy-kins?”.

Tili turned to the pair of humans. “This is as far as I can go. It’s time for us to tell each other the truth.”

“You listened in, didn’t you?” Rintiala asked.

“Yes, I’m just too curious,” Tili replied, biting her lower lip again.

“So? What more surprises could we have for each other?”

“The biggest one I’ll bet. Rintiala, I can’t enter the Sanctuary. But I’ve got this compulsion programmed into me to do so. Every time I’ve tried, I black out and wake up on the street here. That’s how I met  Puppy. The Western Bandits were going to take me apart with iron bars, but he stopped them.”

“And you want me to escort you in? What difference would that make?”

“You’re the big chance everyone is has been waiting for. Rintiala, Cy and I are just caretakers. There isn’t some army of synthetics hidden underneath Paradise Valley waiting to destroy all invaders. It’s just a residence. We tried to shoo the Western Bandits out of the homes around the edge of Paradise Valley, but they just wouldn’t go. And then I had my blackouts, and Cy got worried. So we used the only protection we had.”

“The diseases. And even that’s not going to work much longer.”

“Not with you here, no.”

“So, I if open the gate and walk through, all our questions will be answered.”

“That’s what my compulsion tells me, yes.”  Tili’s brows furrowed. “So, what do you want me to do next?”

End Game

Pov: Rintiala (Close 3d)

Hunts-the-Ruins hunched down and began to inspect the rock formations of the Sanctuary. “Rintiala, these rock formations aren’t natural.  The Camelback Mountain formation is supposedly weathered quartzite, but there are no fissures to be seen in the rock.  Everything is held together by some matte-finish glossy material.” He stood up and looked around.  “This whole mountain has been enhanced or replaced by Sky Wanderer glass.  It’s a fortress, not a resort.” He smiled at the Nueguan girl.  “They don’t call me Hunts-the-Ruins for nothing.”

“What can we do about that now?” Rintiala replied, exasperated. “I’ve got no idea what could be waiting for us. My dream stops right here, except for one important detail. Find me something I can use. ”

Tili looked at Rintiala longingly. “I really, really want to help you too, but to tell the truth, I don’t remember what happens after this point.”

“Try knocking. I’ll be right here if you black out again,” Rintiala suggested.  Both of her allies were showing trepidation at a time when she could use some real help, she thought.

“Okay.” Tili walked up the wrought iron gate, and grabbed a knocker handle, quaintly designed in the Apache Spider Woman motif. “You’d think there’d be some fancy high-technology around here, wouldn’t you?” she said, looking back over her shoulder, and winking at Rintiala.

“Don’t touch that thing, Tili!” Rintiala shouted, running up and pushing the synthetic away.  Rintiala was suprised at how light Tili was. She weighed no more than a human woman, and seemed as fragile, for all that Rintiala knew about her synthetic frame.  “It’s a machine, and it’s changing shape.”

And so the knocker was. It unfolded, to become a spider made of glistening, sliding worms. The cast-iron look had been just that, an appearance only.  The spider-shaped then folded in on itself several times, until it became a lozenge-shaped  plaque with a four-side diamond in the center. The diamond pulsed, opening and closing like the nostrils of some large beast. Rintiala could hear far-away tinkling music coming from its openings.

“Usually, I just stick my hands in when it forms two holes,” Tili explained. “But then, I always wake up hours later, on my back, with Puppy looking over me.”

“Perhaps I could try, instead?” Rintiala offered.

“Then you could wake up on your back with me staring at you,” Hunt-the-Ruins said.

Rintiala rolled her eyes.

The SuperDog, or Puppy, used its massive shoulders to nudge Rintiala. He whined, and Tili translated. “He says it’s for you to open, Rintiala, though how he’d know, I don’t have a clue.”

Puppy spoke again, with short barks as consonants. “He says you know how this works. Clap your hands.” Tili explained.

“Clap your hands if you’re happy!” Rintiala shouted. “Tili, Hunts-the-Ruins, that’s the first thing you learn when you start to Sister Sign.” she said.  She looked at Puppy. “You know more than you let on.” Puppy answered by twining around her so closely she had to crouch a little to keep standing.

Rintiala pointed flattened hands and inserted them into the diamond orifices. Immediately the massive gates slide away, disappearing into the quasi-rock.  The lone stachion left began to glow in cyan blue.  She could feel another set of hands evanescent yet real, embracing her own.

“Tili, something or someone has got a hold of me,” Rintiala said.

“Maybe I can help,” Tili offerred.  “What does it feel like?”

“Like my hands are a mile long, and my fingers are reaching under Camelback Mountain for something,” Rintiala answered.

“I could pull your arms out,” Hunts-the-Ruins said.

“No, I want you to be on the lookout for Mother and that awful Zeb person.”

“How about Tili does that instead?” he countered. “She’ll take a bullet or two better than me.”

“Oh no, I won’t!” Tili protested. “I’m a gardener, not a soldier. Rintiala, you decide.”

“I already told you, Apache, stand watch. That’s an order from a Sister, and you’d better obey if you really want to be a Trader.”

“All right, all right.” Hunts-the-Ruins complained. “I’ll take up a station on that east ridge, though without my Winchester I don’t know what good it will do.”  He marched off.

“Okay, Rintiala, on three, I’ll pull your hands out,” Tili said.  “One, two, three!” they chimed.  Rintiala’s hands came out a inch, followed by a puff of something white and fleecy.  It floated in the air for a moment, then settled on her wrists, and began to twine itself around her arms.

Rintiala caught flashing specks of green, at the limit of her visual acuity.  “Tili, it’s hundreds of thousands of those motile spores!”

“Oh, you mean those cute little cacti I planted everywhere? I wonder how they got in there? No worry, they’re harmless,” Tili cooed.

“Well, those harmless little things are nearly at my armpits, and I’m still not free,” Rintiala complained.

“Do you want me to try again? To pull harder?” Tili asked.

“Okay, but really pull this time. I’m very strong, you won’t hurt me.”

This time Tili dug her feet into the desert sand, put her arms around Rintiala’s waist, and tugged with the strength of an average Old Human. Rintiala wondered why Tili had not been built stronger.  Instead of setting her free, the fleece grew exponentially,  flowing down Rintiala’s torso, and up her neck.

“That’s more than enough. Step away from her. Now!”  The unmistakeable voice of Alathea bounced off the quasi-rock of the Sanctuary.

Tili moved closer to Rintiala, who strained to turn her head to the left, to see Alathea marching down the center of the street, Winchester rifle at the ready. “Who’s that awful woman?” Tili asked.

“That’s my mother.”

“Well, hello Rintiala’s mother,” Tili burbled. “Could you help us? We’ve got a little problem here.”

Alathea responded by pointing and firing, aiming the rifle at the small of Tilis’ back.  A crack of rifle fire, and Tili arched, writhing. “What are you doing?” she screamed.  Tili dragged herself to her knees, and held herself close to Rintiala.

Alathea quickly strode up to the two of them,  placed the muzzle of the Winchester on Tili’s navel and fired point-blank, nearly cutting the synthetic in two. “All right, a favor done,”  Alathea said.  “Daughter, what do you need me to do?”

Rintiala leaned against the stanchion, the fleece now covering her upper body, hips and upper thighs. “You’ve done enough damage, Mother.”

“I’m just trying to help,” Alathea objected, raising her voice to be heard over Tili’s wracked sobs.

A low rumble, so low that Rintiala tasted rather than heard it, began to build from the center of the Sanctuary.  Wavelets of sand began to vibrate.  Rintiala thought she was seeing double as all the buildings shimmied and shivered, reflections of the morning sun bouncing off their windows in all directions.

Another rumble started up, this time from the throat of Puppy.  He lept at Alathea, who dropped into a crouch, and hit him in the throat, her fingers formed into a blade. A single choked yelp, and he twisted and rolled off bouncing on the north slope.

Rintiala noticed that the landscape was changing. Nearby houses appeared to be receding into the distance.  At the same time, the artificial flowers that she had expected to be there were emerging from the ground in a ring all around the Sanctuary, their petals opening up, this time a virulent pulsing blue color.

It hit her what was happening. Tili had told her the truth.  There was no need of armed sentries in the Sanctuary.  The entire complex was a sentry.

Rintiala looked over her right shoulder to see Hunts-The-Ruins running toward her. Another bucking of the ground, and he not only lost his balance, falling on his back, but he began to slide east.  The homes and buildings of Paradise Valley were receding as she watched.  Angry blue artificial flowers were now rising out of the ground as far as her eyes could see.

Alathea went to protect her daughter, but Tili caught her with a solid kick to the solar plexus. It sent Alathea tumbling down the north slope, now many stories above street level.  Rintiala heard the growl of Puppy as he renewed his attack on the Nueguan woman.

Only Rintiala’s head was left uncovered by the fleece. She perceived herself as being the Sanctuary now, her body one with it.  Finally, the stanchion with Rintiala alone on it began to descend down a smooth shaft into the depths of the Sanctuary.  Choking on the desert dust that slowly filtered down the hole with her, Rintiala closed her eyes and prepared to meet her fate.
[BREAK POV HERE  — Shift to Hunts-the-Ruins]

Hunts-The-Ruins came to laying on his back, covered with burrs.  He sat up, nearly impaling himself on a saguaro that he had miraculously missed on his slide down the newly-altered southeast slope of Camelback Mountains. He heard war cries and wolf growls off to the north-west, but his awareness of Rintiala’s plight took precedence.

He was standing and dusting himself off when a large very old model automobile cruised up, nearly touching his hip with its fender.  An Apache got out, in traditional white denim, wearing a tourquoise Spider Woman necklace that declared him a non-combatant.

“I’ve got to get back…” Hunts-The-Ruins slowly looked up at the Sanctuary, “…up.”  The gate of the Sanctuary, now off to his left, was at least seven stories above his ground level.

The driver of the antique held out his hand. “Name’s Long-Jumper, from the Jicarilla Apache.”  Hunts-The-Ruins took it, and pulled himself up.

“Hunts-The-Ruins, Phoenix Apache.  I’m here doing field work for my final Trader certification.”

Long-Jumper raised an eyebrow for a moment, then smiled and nodded his head.  “Looks to me like you’re in trouble. You only crossed into Paradise Valley an hour ago, and so far, you’ve lost your rifle, and that Gringo blonde that you’re supposed to be protecting. No offense, but you won’t make Trader at this rate.”

“How do you know all this?”

“I keep a sharp lookout,” He pointed to the binocular holster on his belt. “But, I’m here to help. If you Phoenix Apache pull this off, we’re next in line for advancement. I get to be the next Trader.”

Long Jumper stared at north-west slope of Camelback Mountain for a moment. He sucked in a breath and said. “You could try climbing it, but I’ve got a better idea,” the Jicarilla newcomer said.

“What do you mean we?” Hunts-the-Ruins countered. “I though you were just observer, and couldn’t get involved in the confrontation.”

“Consider me a mechanical consultant,” he smiled slyly. “You can always bill me later.”

“What have you got in mind?”

“Well, you see that real small, sharp ridge just in the center of the other peaks?”

“Yeah, it’s called the Praying Monk. The rock-if that’s what it is–is only a few feet thick.  Kind of a big razor blade.”

“Well, if you drove up one of these nice residential streets the Sky Wanderers left behind, and hit the dirt on the mountain fast enough, you could practically fly over the Praying Monk.”

“Come on, nobody’s got a truck with that kind of speed and power.”

“Really? Well, I do.” Long Jumper looked at him, as he was judging Hunts-the-Ruins’ weight and size. ” You ever race before?”

“No.” Hunts-the-Ruins replied.

“Well, let’s hope you’re one quick Apache when it comes to learning things.”

Long Jumper began running backwards before he turned around to reach his truck.  “Did you notice anything odd about my rig?”

“Yeah, it isn’t a White Mountain Standard. What year is it?”

“Near as I can tell, it’s somewhere between 1932 and 1977.  All tooled from original Ford specifications,
except for the methane converter and…” He opened the driver’s door, jumped into the seat, and brought the engine to roaring life. He then pulled a knob located beneath the steering wheel. A high-pitched whine started up, making Hunts-the-Ruins’ ears ring. “…that.”

“What is that?”

“That my practical friend, is a supercharger. We’ll get you flying over that ridge, pronto, Tonto.”

Normally, Hunts-the-Ruins liked to sit down to his drafting board and his slide rule, to calculate the trajectories of such a launch.  But now, the images and formulae floating in colored sparkles on the inside of his eyelids: the images on the left, formulae on the right. He blinked and they were still there.  Was this what Rintiala meant about his judgement being compromised? Or was this what it meant to be a Nueguan?

Hunts-the-Ruins chose. As soon as he thought of possible problems in angular momentum, a series of solutions emerged from the dark of his consciousness.  When he considered possible deviations from true because of desert vegetation, all the formulae but two faded out.  They hovered, one cyan, one violet.  Instinctively he chose the cyan.

“Okay, I’ve got it,” Hunts-the-Ruins said aloud to Long Jumper.

“Got what?”

“The answer to how we have to move this thing over Praying Monk Ridge.”

“But…” Long Jumper protested. “You’ve never seen the west slope yet! How can you know?”

“Trust me,” Hunts-the-Ruins answered. “I’ve got it all worked out.”

“It’s your Apache funeral.”  Long Jumper scuffed the ground, a sprinter waiting at the block. “Let’s go.”


[POV: Rintiala; closed 3rd]

With her eyes closed, Rintiala began to be aware that the vibrations from the rock were making her hip bones sing in response.  She was about to focus on that when the cold hit her. Her Nueguan body reflexively began to contract and release its muscles, optimizing blood flow against hypothermia.

The stanchion dropped several feet lower, and the well began to warm and light up. Softly glowing cyan snails appeared to defy gravity, crawling up the well.  Finally Rintiala came to a stop. An antechamber of cyan, white and indigo, all interwoven in some pattern she could not detect from her vantage point, led into an expansive area filled with motiles. Light from both external and internal sources made her squint.

Before Rintiala’s booted foot could leave the platfrom, the motiles filaments flowed away towards the light ahead of her.  Somehow they untied her top, and her short and boots fell apart like old rotted parchments, turning into dark grey dust billows as they hit the floor.  Naked, she looked on in wonder as an image of herself as a small child grew to womanhood.  The form shimmered in the gentle breezes that blew out of the greater room. Rintiala could see dust motes dancing through it.  At the apex of her development, the woman’s shoulders expanded, and her hair turned from gold to red.  Shocked, Rintiala stared at an almalgam of herself and Alathea, not quite one or the other.

A voice spoke from behind her in Gringo English, with an accent unlike anything Rintiala had heard before. “There seems to be a problem, Sister,” it said. “You’re not the one I was waiting for.”

[POV: Hunts-the-Ruins]

“Okay, I’ve got to give you a crash course in how a supercharger works.   It uses screw compressors. They’re positive displacement superchargers. They reach boost instantly, no lag time.”

“Could we get technical later? I’ve got a Gringo blonde to save,” Hunts-the-Ruins said.

“Hey, I’m helping you, remember?”

“Okay, go one…”

“This gives you unbelievable torque and horsepower numbers,” Long-Jumper lectured on, clearly in love with his car.

“And that’s important because?”

“You have maximum power at low RPMs as well as high RPMs.”  Long-Jumper smiled, revealing a gold tooth.

The importance of the lecture sprang like a hiding cougar into Hunts-the-Ruins’ mind.  “Because I need maximum power not only when I leap, but when I land.  To control this thing.”

“This thing? My car! Hey, right now I’m trying to deal with the fact you’re probably going to crack my windshield.”

“Bill me when this is over.”

“No. I want your word now that you’ll outfit my new ranch house completely in Sky Wanderer glass.” Long-Jumper smiled again. “As if I didn’t know about your reputation.”  He closed the driver’s-side door. “I’m out of here. It’s all yours.”

“Done. Your house in glass. If I live.”

Hunts-the-Ruins went through the mental drill on more time. Approach Praying Ridge, upshifting all the time to gain traction, and don’t fire up the supercharger until just before shifting into fifth gear. Downshift while in mid-air, and land in first, turning the steering wheel to adjust for angular momentum.  Don’t crack the windshield.  He grinned at the last point.

The doing of it was less stressful than the worrying about it. He roared past gorgeous Sky Wanderer homes, trampled their intricate desert gardens under the Ford’s solid-rubber tires, and finally caught the edge of Camelback Mountain.  The Sky Wanderers were sloppy, he thought, not calculating for the grit that the endless desert winds would deposit.

He hit the knife edge of Praying Monk, simultaneously igniting the supercharger and shifting to fifth gear.  Airborne for the first time in his life, his war-cry jumped from his heart to his lips. This beat laying pipe any day.  What a thing to be a Trader.

It was then that he noticed a small, angry, blue, artificial flower, tall and slender, translucent as glass, had emerged just below the edge.  His back axle caught the delicate edge of one of its’ top petals.  Inexorably, he began to feel the automobile rotate on its long axis.

The interior of Camelback Mountain, all garden and tended sand, looked soft and inviting. Unfortunately, it was five stories below him, and he could feel his weight increasing on his left side as the Ford slowly rolled.


[POV: Rintiala]

[The next scene is transition and exposition, to bring Rintiala up to speed with the Bright Queen transformation that has begun.  Rather than use the ‘boring backstory’ approach, have Rintiala meet Sean for the first time. It would far more interesting if the Nueguans did not know that they had a human creator; their worldview would then be more mystical and religious, akin to the Navaho, but not at all Christian.]

Instead of having Rintiala listen meekly to Landesten’s exposition-of-the-ages (I wonder how I accepted that in my own writing, since I always fast-forward that part of a movie), she fights with him, and steals (Prometheus’ style) the secret of the Birthing Mothers from him.

Of course, she is cursed by hubris. He inserts a little piece of himself into her (oooh creepy) and that’s what sets off the Birthing Mothers. That little piece (called a ‘kernel’ in the computer world) then uses the vast power of the Healing Temple to assemble a Landesten powerful enough to stop Rintiala during the caesarean. When she turns back around, the almagam has become the Water Woman, beckoning her with a glass ball filled with writhing coral snakes.

Rintiala turned to face the voice, and saw another form as translucent as the first. A tall, powerfully-built Gringo man in his sixties, wearing ancient clothing, stood before her, arms crossed.

“What do you mean?” she challenged him.

“You are supposed to be three years old. That’s why the puzzle is easy, and you were asked to sing.  I expected you to be here with your mother. She should be your age.”

“But I’m the only one who saw the Water Woman.  Mother said she caught an image inside the flash of cyan, when she was my age, but she thought it came from her own imagination.”

“It did not.  In order to truly defeat the Sky Wanderers, you must accept the transformation into the Bright Queen.  It has to be done consciously, which for a Nueguan girl is three.  I’m sorry, but my forecasts concerning the changes that will occur in your body, and especially your brain, aren’t good.”

“Can’t you just do it to me?”

“No, volition is part of the new psychic structure. You have to train for it.”

The man uncrossed his arms, and stroked his beard in thought. “Oh well, we’ll just have to improvise.  My name is Sean Landesten. Perhaps you’ve heard me.”

It was Rintiala’s turn to cross her arms in defiance. “You? You’re True Father? The one who created the Nueguan people?”

The man smiled and tilted his head back in honour of being recognized. “Yes, that’s me. Or rather, I’m an organic artificial intelligence, containing ninety per cent or greater of Sean’s intelligence and personality.”

“You know what I think? I think that you’re a rogue artificial intelligence with delusions of grandeur.  True Father is a myth the males created to feel better about themselves. We Sisters aren’t fooled.  Earth Mother made us out of desert dust, across the eons.”

“Well, now, if we’re going to argue, we should be properly introduced. Your name is?”

“Rintiala of Clan Tiala.”

The man laughed quietly at that. “She was right, they’d turn everything into art and religion. Do you know what a rin is?”

“Now you’re just being stupid. A rin is the droplet that comes from a Little Doctor. It looks like a little amber jewel.  That’s where the medicine and power of the Sisters resides.”

“Really? A RIN is the Recursive Instructional Nexus, an organic computer built into every cell of your body.  It built the Nueguan people after I–or should I say Sean?–died.  And you are generation 16 of RIN1 of the New Genetic Woman project, a title which a Spanish woman friend of mine demanded I change into something poetic, so we settled on Nuegua.  You weren’t created across the eons. Nuegua is no more than four hundred years old.”

Rintiala felt that there were two of her, one cold and calculating, one passionate and furious. She had risked everything to come here, and only true help she got had been from a synthetic her mother had permanently damaged.  She decided to the let the passionate, furious Rintiala out; after all her calculating self had left her into this predicament.

“I’ve had enough.  Prove to me who you are. Make me the Bright Queen or whatever fantasy you’ve conjured up, waiting all this time down in the dark.”

“You’ve think I’ve been just waiting?” the Landesten form shouted, his voice emanating from the walls of the antechamber in a way Rintiala couldn’t fathom.  “It took a century to get Tili to plant all the motiles, so that I could finally manifest here.  And it took four hundred years for the RIN in you to activate. ”

“Liar,” Rintiala countered. “How could wispy old you fool Tili?”

“Liar, am I?” the Landesten form puffed out his cheeks, which was an odd effect, seeing how the cyan lights of the antechamber were glowing through them. “Centuries ago, when I was alive and had the run of this place, I made one last tiny change to her gardening database. I added an entry for endangered cacti. The rest, as they say, is history.”

“And you changed her, gave her a compulsion to enter the Sanctuary?  How can motiles possibly effect a synthetic? No Sister in Nuegua could do that, and we’re a lot brighter than you, I’ll wager.”

“Let’s just say there’s carbon polymer chains, and then there’s carbon polymer chains.  But you wouldn’t understand any of that. That level of science we made very sure was unavailable to you Nueguans, Sisters or no.”

“Then show me how it all works, or I’m going to find my own way out of here, collect my stuff, and go home.”
Hunts-the-Ruins was right, she thought, with new admiration for the Apache. It had been a complete waste of time. Why should she argue with this arrogant, worn-out artificial intelligence, when she could just go home and ask the Pregnant Virgin what the real truth was?

“Ah, so you’re ready to become the Bright Queen? Ready to develop the powers to see beyond time and space, to enter into the world of spirits and sorcerers?”

“Finally caught you,” Naked or not, Rintiala widened her stance to a fighting pose, pointed her finger, and shouted back at the Landesten form.  “There’s no such thing as those kinds of powers; there aren’t any spirits, and sorcerers are just ignorant old people practicing medicine with responsibility.”

“Then turn around, and prepare to have your world turned inside out,”  the artificial intelligence said quietly.


[POV: Hunts-the-Ruins]

Hunts-the-Ruins was amazed by how much time there was to think while he was hurtling to his doom. He thought that if he had it to do over again, he would have gotten married and had children at his  ripe old Apache age of twenty-five, rather than devoting himself to his career. But then again, he would be leaving behind a grieving family.  He was also amazed by the calm detachment he had while the desert and buildings
rose up to meet him.

“Just open the door,” a little voice said to him. “And what, jump?” Hunts-the-Ruins replied to himself. “I’m strapped into all this leather webbing that Long-Jumper built. No, I’m not going anywhere.”

“Just open the door,” the voice whispered again, this time bringing up images and formulae of possible outcomes of his predicament.  One formule glowed in cyan, this time blinking.  All he had to do was open the driver’s-side door, and his spin would increase, allowing him to land right-side up.  “All right, I’m agreeable to that,” he said to himself.  “After you,” and with that he hit the handle hard.

The calculations were correct. With the slow solemnity of a Sundance ceremony, the Ford continued to roll. Hunts-the-Ruins had a fleeting thought that maybe this was all a dream, and that he was going to wake up in his sleeping roll out in a cold desert evening beside a dying campfire.   But the ground was coming up too fast for that.  The Ford was going to land right-side up, all right, but balanced on the edge of a infinity pool, one end in cool water, the other end dangling two stories above the desert floor.  The slightest miscalculation of that magical cyan formula, and he would go crashing motor-end down, this time dead for sure.

Impaired judgement was so embarassing, he thought.


[POV: Rintiala]

Rintiala faced the form of herself. She watched in awe as the cyan worms sprayed droplets of water onto the red-haired image of herself. Instead of crushing its delicacy, each drop spread across the filaments, giving it structure and support, much like the surface of a soap bubble.  Rintiala/Alathea was filling up and filling in. In two heartbeats, its arms and legs began to move, imitating Rintiala’s own.

The Water Woman held out her hands. Filaments flew from the center of her palms, rotating into a ball. Tiny shapes began to writhe within it, and the dreaded baby snakes turned to look at the Nueguan girl in unison.

“Let them bite you,” Water Women said with Landesten’s voice. “It is the only way.”

Rintiala held her arms down to her sides. She was strong enough and fast enough to knock these insubstantial creatures out of the air, but then she would never know the truth of her dream.  The Water Woman’s entire body writhed and snakes leapt across the space to land on Rintiala’s heart.  Fire exploded in her chest, and pain worse than anything she had ever felt coursed through the major nerve channels of her body.  Rintiala perceived it as being frozen, burnt and beaten to death simultaneously as the snakes altered her body at the cellular level.   Then her perspective shifted. She became a disembodied head, watching in awe as she was created and destroyed, and recreated many times in the space of heartbeat.

“You must not fight it,” Landesten insisted. “If you try to separate yourself from it, you will go mad. Accept the fact that today you must die in battle.”

Rintiala screamed with all the power she had.  Her eyes froze and exploded; her ears were burnt and punctured, her skull crushed.  Then an instant of non-being. And then she saw how it all was.  Fury was the key.

“You haven’t been helpful enough,” Rintiala said calmly, now reduced to speck of light in the antechamber. “I’m going to need what you have, too.”  With the arms of her intellect she reached backward, and dragged the Landesten form to herself in a lover’s embrace.  Landesten began to wither as the filaments that composed his body gave themselves up to Rintiala’s will.

“I’m leaving, but you’re coming with me,” Rintiala told the withering Landesten.

A loud clap, and a small splash of water. Rintiala stood alone and naked in the antechamber.  The untelligible designs now flowed to the larger area, making arrows that tinkled with tiny voices, ready to answer any questions.

Rintiala stepped forward into the light and the warmth.  Before her lay thousands upon thousands of motiles, basking in the sun that filtered into this hidden place.  She thought of her clothes, and on each side of the path before her, motile filaments began to weave copies of her cloak and boots, dozens of different variations in design and color. She stooped down to the nearest cloak, picked it up, shook it over her head, and let it fall around her shoulders.  Not quite Mothersilk, but better than Apache cotton. Good enough.

“He was right,” Rintiala said to herself. “There’s carbon polymers, and then there’s carbon polymers. ”

A bark at the other end of the hidden room. Puppy bounded before her, whining. Rintiala could not understand what he was trying to tell her.  Landesten’s powers had their limits.

“Puppy, said it slower and lower,” Rintiala insisted, kneeling down and looking him in the eyes.

“Am…tel” he barked, clearly in distress. “Name…Amtel”

“Okay, Amtel, what’s wrong.”


“No, Amtel, Tili’s not dead, she’s just broken. We’ll get Cy to fix her.”

Amtel threw back his head and howled his reply.  “No!” he said, the nasal consonants causing him real pain. “Tili kill you…me…everything!”


The scene ends with Rintiala seeing the final artificial flower emerge from the centre of the infinity pool, just outside the main window of the room that she is in. This flower is different, violet and cream white.  Tili is dragging herself to it, for what purposes Rintiala does not know. Landesten warns Rintiala that Tili has the power to unleash the great flowers and destroy everything within their horizon. She must be stopped.

[BREAK POV HERE — Shift back to Rintiala]

Rintiala watches as Alathea engages the Western Bandits in combat. Feeling that her back is protected, she turns to Tili. Tili’s irises shift indigo to cyan again. In her low, gruff voice, she can only say that Rintiala must accept the bites.

Rintiala leaps from the dais to some of the motiles hanging near the edge of the opening. With a satisfied grunt, she pulls herself over the ledge, just in time to see Tili reach the dais, and push down its pistil. The great artificial flowers open, and their pistils light up a cold and menacing blue.  Rintiala doesn’t need a long-winded explanation to know that the power she sees displayed is destructive. She skitters across the roof and jumps down into the garden, only a few feet from Hunts-the-Ruins. They both run to stop Tili, but it is Amtel who arrives at the scene first. He locks his teeth onto Tili’s good arm, and down they go, deep into the pool.  Hunts-the-Ruins is about to dive in, when Rintiala tells him to stop.
Tili has let go of Amtel, who erupts to the water’s surface.  While they all watch, the synthetic woman drifts listlessly to the bottom of the infinity pool.

“We’ve beaten her,” Hunts-the-Ruins says.

“No, we still need her,” Rintiala argues. She dives in to retrieve Tili, and Hunts-the-Ruins does the same. Together they drag the synthetic woman pool side.

Tili apologizes to Rintiala. She must fulfil her compulsion, but she doesn’t want to hurt anyone. The conflict can be heard in her voice.
“What will happen now?”

“If I don’t adjust the stamens on the flower, the blue lights will burn out any organic life in a circle around the Sanctuary. All the way to the horizon.  There won’t be any Paradise Valley left. You have to let me finish.”

Rintiala helps, over Hunts-the-Ruins objections.  She counters him with: “You’d better go help the Western Bandits. Mother is busy getting even.”

He tells her how he has tried to the right thing by her, and how he has had enough of her flippant attitude in the face of danger. He stomps off toward the gunfire and shouting.

When Tili is finished, all the stamens are pointing toward a common point in the sky. They fire simultaneously, releasing so much energy that a hot winds blows across the two.  “What did you just do?” Rintiala asks.

“What I had to,” Tili replies. “I sent the Sky Wanderers a warning.” Tili begins to sob in her conflicted state and asks Rintiala to de-commission her, but pressing three points on Tili’s backbone.

Tili’s Final Revelation to Rintiala.
Why did Rintiala pass so easily through Cy’s security?
Because only Rintiala’s mother is a Nueguan.
Her father is a Sky Wanderer, which seems impossible since they all left Earth.
But the proof is in the DNA.

[Break POV — Shift to Hunts-the-Ruins]

Hunts-the-Ruins opens the main Sanctuary gate doors from inside, only to see Alathea battling with Western Bandit snipers three stories below.  She is wrapped  in her Mothersilk cloak, and is wielding her Winchester one-handed, firing from her hip. One by one, the Western Bandits either die or slink away, unable to hit her anywhere vital. She uses the voluminous sleeves of her cloak to catch the bullets the snipers fire, moving far past the speed of old Gringo humans.

It looks like she will wear them down to nothing when a  teen-aged Western Bandit calmly strides toward her, firing and reloading his Sharps Buffalo rifle.  Undaunted by her ability to deflect his bullets, he fires at her point blank.  She uses her sleeves to knock him down with his own last bullet.  Lying on the ground, watching her walk toward him with a Mothershell knife her hand, he taunts her to the last. She might have him, but Seamus will kill her for sure.

[Shift POV to Rintiala]

Rintiala is watching the battle from screen inside the Sanctuary, with Landesten explaining blow-by-blow. She tells him she can’t just sit idly by while her mother is killed. Landesten responds. “I won’t be much help, as I’m light-headed and flimsy-fingered. But there is a way.” He waves a hand, and metal door appears from behind a wall-screen. The motiles’ filaments cover its locking mechanism, and Landesten tells Rintiala to place her palm on it. The door opens up into a small armory.  Rintiala tells him she will not use offensive weapons ever. He counters by saying. “Well you can’t go out there naked. I have just the outfit for you. Another hand wave, and a suit of indigo-colored body armor emerges on a rack.

[Shift POV to Hunts-the-Ruins]

Down East MacDonald at a full gallop comes a Western Bandit in full leathers, brandishing a saber of unusual color. It is an indestructible ceramic Sky Wanderer saber that he holds in his right hand.  He wheels in between the boy and Alathea, leaps to the ground and fires a .50 caliber Colt at her heart. This is no black-powder heirloom, but an early twenty-first century revolver, using the last of the modern rounds.  He knocks her off her feet with a single shot.

Hunts-the-Ruins calls out to him to stop this madness. Seamus looks up, holsters his weapon and calls for parley.  Hunts-the-Ruins just makes it to him, when Cy arrives at synthetic speeds. He is armed with an weed trimmer that uses a shaped charge as its blade; a tool perfected in the early twenty-second century, the same era that created Tili and Cy. Unsteadily, wheezing from the broken rib the bullet gave her, she stands to face her Western Bandit opponent.  She should be dead, but she isn’t. (Later we will learn that she triple-wrapped Rintiala’s cloak over her torso, and under her own cloak, using the rope from the Clan of Builders to secure them. )

Alathea shouts out to Seamus: “Make a choice, him or me. We both need him dead.”  Alathea faces Cy, as does Seamus. Jumping down from three stories and running at superhuman speeds is a figure wrapped in indigo.  Rintiala pushes Alathea out of the way.  Cy is fast, but a fully-armored Nueguan is a match in speed and strength. He burns her armor a few times, but she body-throws him, and his weapon goes skittering away on the carbocrete.  Seamus beheads him in a coup-de-grace. Rintiala removes her helmet innocently, and Seamus places the tip of his blade on her throat.  Alathea responds by putting her knife under the boy’s chin. The boy cries out: “Daddy!  Help me.”

“My daughter for your son. That’s the deal,” Alathea shouts.

“You’d better agree, or you’ll both lose a child,” Finds-Water says, quietly sauntering up East Macdonald, overseeing the wreckage.
Seamus drops his saber, and Finds-Water picks it up. “The Colt also,” Finds-Water says quietly.  Seamus draws it, and points it at Finds-Waters chest.  From the southeast and southwest, dozens of dune buggies, with armed and armored Apache Police pull up.  Some of the dune buggies are carrying Western Bandit prisoners, those snipers who slinked away.

Seamus drops his gun.

Finds-Water asks Alathea to give him his rope and Rintiala’s cloak. While the four—Rintiala, Hunts-the-Ruins, Finds-Water and Alathea, stand in a circle, surrounded by Apache Police. Finds-Water takes the Trader’s medallion from his neck, and drapes it on Hunts-The-Ruins. Finds-Water declares Hunts-the-Ruins a full Apache Trader. The Phoenix Apache are now the eighth tribe of Apacheria, and Paradise Valley is their new administrative capital. Over shouted objections of betrayal from Seamus, Finds-Water declares the Western Bandits officially persona non grata in Apacheria.

In the presence of all, Alathea removes her Cyan Dragon cloak, and drapes it on Rintiala’s shoulder. She declares her daughter to be a full First Sister of the Healers’ Guild of Tiala.

The whole assembly begins to head back down East MacDonald to Agua Linda park, to debrief.


Finds-Water asked Hunts-the-Ruins: “So what do you think of your first day as an Apache Trader?”

Hunts-the-Ruins answered: “Those I thought to be enemies were not; those I thought were allies couldn’t be trusted.”

“About normal, then,” Finds-Water replied. “But you can’t judge the Nueguans too harshly. They’re not really human anymore.”

“I don’t know how human you and I are anymore,” Hunts-the-Ruins answered sadly.



Chapter Three: Yassah Learns His Checkers

In this chapter, Ariana, the younger sister of Rintiala is presented with a problem that literally pops up out of nowhere.  She is in the south-east part of Nuegua, closest to the Galiuro wilderness, working with the Guild of Gardeners and the Guild of Builders on a vast new garden project, headed by Berylia, who is in the process of creating the Companions, those young women who failed to pass the tests of the Pregnant Virgin.  Ariana is sent there during her Second Sister period as a token gesture by the Guild of Healers, who have become more secluded in the last few years, working on their own secret projects. Ariana befriends Alope, Dianire’s younger sister. From Alope, Ariana learns all about the Graspers, a cross between a kangaroo and an owl whose function it is in Nueguan society to manage the emus and turkeys, protecting them from coyotes, cougars and wolves.   Ariana is befriended by Yassah and Shassah, a male-and-female Grasper pair of unusually high intelligence, Yassah especially.   He is the equivalent of a bright six-year-old when we first meet him, and fascinated by the game of checkers, which Alope has taught him.   More than that, alone of all Graspers, Yassah can talk in a song-song sibilance.

A threat to all Nuegua arises when Seamus Espinoza Jr.  leads a party of young wild, rebellious desparados (to Seamus Espinoza Sr.) into this village of the Gardeners.  Wily and skilled, Seamus Jr. has figured out how to cross the Galiuro on a series of towers and pulleys, going from rock formation to rock formation.  Attempting to cross the Galiuro on foot is impossible except for a Healer, because the termites  in their billions will sense an enemy human presence (anyone not a Healer) and attack.

How has the Galiuro come about?  It is the resting place of the Wild Mothers, those Cactus Mothers whose growth went awry.   Nueguans never destroy their sacred technologies, so they transport them to the Galiuro wilderness, leaving these ‘Wild Mothers’ to their fate.  Most are dying, but some have survived to become menaces.

Seamus Jr. and his band of desparados intend to sack the Healing Temple in Clan Tiala, because they mistakenly believe that it is made of gold.  (The new Healing Temple has translucent golden walls, but that is the choice of the Builders, in the process of learning to work with Mothersilk).

It is the team of Ariana, Alope, Yassah and Shassah who thwart the plans of Seamus Jr. by using tricks from the game of checkers (actually moves from the British Draughts Society).   Once it is clear that Ariana’s team is winning, Berylia steps into the fray with her Companions, demonstrating the combat skills of these young girls who otherwise appear to be geisha.

When Tianara, First Sister of the Builders, and Combat Master of All Guilds (and Alopes’ eldest sister) arrives, the fight is already over.  Tianara thanks Ariana, noting that Ariana did not require the powers of the Pregnant Virgin to solve this dilemna.

I wrote this chapter a long time ago, focussing on Alope and Yassah, but it needs to be rewritten so that the reader can identify with Ariana, who will be the catalyst for all the political and social changes that will occur in Nuegua Book One: The Summer People.